• Member Since 25th May, 2018
  • offline last seen Dec 28th, 2021

Xavier271


I love Flutterdash, best ponies, best ship.

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For years Rainbow has kept a secret from all of her friends, she has feared them finding out for as long as she can remember. What would happen if they were to find out. Rainbow's biggest fears are about to become true.

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Comments ( 10 )

Still getting a handle on that troublesome, new language, huh?

8961829
I've looked at this message for about 5 minutes now, and I simply cannot decipher what it means.

8962562
I was referring to your subpar English. You see, in the third grade, we learn that titles are capitalised (among other things).

8962564
I literally just realised what you are talking about, wow my English is poor, and it's my primary language.

Wow. I'm normally a FlutterDash fan, but I think it was a bit cold that Rarity and Applejack just broke off their friendship with the others.

Not to mention, I agree that the grammar isn't exactly the best I've seen.

8965537
Apologies for the bad grammar, I'll try to make it better in the future, but thanks for the feedback.

8967028
Like I said though, Rarity and Applejack falling out with the others wasn't something I liked either.

8967272
I was thinking of writing a sequel where they would fix relations with each other.

8967278
I like that idea. This is a good story, a sequel would be awesome.

9366413
Thanks for the feedback, currently working on another Flutterdash story but it's unrelated to this one.

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