• Published 2nd Mar 2019
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Her darkest hour - Xavier271



Fluttershy attempts to end her life, it doesnt go as expected.

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Epilogue

Epilogue

Two weeks later...

"So whachya making?" The buttery pegasus asked.

"I had Pinkie teach me some basic cooking recipes a while ago, this one's for some cinammon buns."

"Ooo i haven't had those in ages, let us hope you know what you're doing, you made a mess last time." Dash blushed.

"Dont worry, I know what im doing, but maybe thats just something i tell myself." Dash had a sly grin plastered on her phase. Both ponies chuckled for a momemt before leaving an awkward silence.

"D...Dash, I..." Fluttershy started to stammer in her words.

"Is everything okay Flutters?" Dash became concerned with her marefriend's sudden change in tone.

"Oh no e...everything's fine, I just wanted to say...thanks for...for everything, I...I don't think i'm depressed anymore."

"Oh...that's so great to hear Flutters, that makes me really happy!." Dash hugged Fluttershy.

"You just make me so happy, I...I love you Rainbow Dash."

"I love you too Fluttershy." Both ponies began to kiss...

The end.

Comments ( 4 )

And what does Discord have to say about all of this?

9484653
I'll say he's the worst friend Fluttershy could have. Not appearing next to Fluttershy when she was in the hospital? Not there when Fluttershy needed comfort? Unless this was before season 2. Then that would be reasonable.

Story is a little short for all the information it contains, and could use a good polish with the editing cloth.

9484653
Ill be honest i forgot about him when writing this story, part of that might be because i dont personally like him very much.


9484686
Thanks for taking the time to read and the criticism, ill keep it in mind for next time.

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