Travel with Brad (AKA Evening Glow) as he (she) has to find out how in the wide world of Equestria that he (she) got sent there in the first place. This fanfic features the Mane 6, the Princesses of the Sun and the Moon, Lyra and Bon-Bon, Derpy and Dinky (and possibly Carrot Top), Clockwork (AKA Time Turner (AKA The Doctor)), and many more ponies as the story progresses.
Please leave all grammar, spelling, or other literary mistake notices in the comments. Also, any and all constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated.
Chapters (3)
There are certain things that are totally fine to do, but that you should probably do in private. Things like masturbating or writing horrible self-insert wish fulfillment fics. Follow me?
This has the makings of a pretty good fanfic, there's just nothing happening really.
I have no comment so here's Applejack to explain!
Ah think it's mighty fine that yer puttin' your heart out there, ya have mah thumbs up for encouragement anyway!
I would have asked Twilight to comment... but she's reading (Do i appear insane? Perhaps i am!)
I'm new to the fandom (fimdom?), but I haven't seen a cross-gender, cross-species transformation story before. I feel like this concept has so much potential, but the fact that he's aware of the MLP universe just kills it for me. What a rare and marvelous opportunity, and yet the wonder and marvel are missing because he (she) already has a partial understanding of what's going on. The fact that Evening Glow (lovely name) decides what her name is so quickly cheapens the whole experience, too. This thread should be a story about self rediscovery. She needs to earn her new name AND her new gender, not just have them doled out.
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Well said.
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OOOOH, a lot of the PonyEarthVerse stories have the change in gender. (and the stories are awesome, I suggest Awakening Pink to start)