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Oh wow, a new chapter so soon after the previous one?
I wonder wha—holy guacamole that's a lotta words...
This'll take a while to chew through. You spoil us.
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Well, after 207k of buildup, I figured the payoff should be worth it, and possibly a little wholesome too. So there.
THIS IS SEX!!!!!! THEY DID THE NASTY!
I chuckled at that line a little bit. Also don't forget the mop and bucket. After being that pent up I can only imagine the mess they will have to clean up in the morning.
Oh my~ Well now. Thats a big step Fleetfoot. Wholesome and lewd
I mentally added "of him" to that and had to take a giggle break.
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Literally going out with a bang, eh?
Was that "swirl" a Seinfeld reference?
Great chapter!
This chapter was so good. 25k words my lord it was an early spooktober gift and very well written. Man i didnt expect clop but holy crap did you deliver. The payoff was fucking huge lmao.
I've always preferred these stories that are a bit more grounded with nothing exactly "epic" going on. The conflict is not some world ending quest its internal between the protagonists. Not to mention reading it from the perspective of the pony is such a nice change for HiE.
just wow 3 updates in the same month what a nice thing to do. I really like this story.
They need to finally get that deep conversation off their chest and they certainly are the better for it. Their fondling and foreplay was terribly sweet and erotic then;
What a cheesy start to what has to be one of the best love scenes I have ever read, anywhere. They weren't just rutting. They were making love. Yeah, yeah, I'm a sappy guy. Seeing it through Fleetfoot's eyes and hearing her internal monologue deftly conveyed the care and tenderness they shared as they truly and purely made love with each other for the first time. The part where Fleetfoot rolls Philip onto his back and positions herself on top of him with her wings spread out behind her back and the look of absolute adoration that must've been on his face will forever be etched in my memory. Well done.
Quite the entertaining chapter.
Pre-Reader/Editor's hella late comment, I apologize, but this is important.
YOU DO THE HOKEY POKEY AND THEN YOU GIVE A LITTLE SHOUT!
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A remark about him lasting much longer than a stallion would not have gone amiss. Other than that, outstanding chapter.