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I know what’s about to happen, you know what’s about to happen, and WE ALL WANT IT TO HAPPEN!!!
Quick note, clairvoyance isn't seeing the future. It's about seeing 'around'. The ability to see what's going on in other places at the same time. Knowing the future is precognition or prescience. Nerdy banality, I know, and unreliable narrator because it's two people talking to one another who aren't total nerds.
I love these two together! Their back-and-forth is so believable and freakin' cute!
I liked the structure of this chapter, and I wonder if Sunset and the mirror have any connection to the sudden radio silence?
This "when will they" romance is killing me inside!
The plot thiccens
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Well the second chapter was pretty much filler and I did skim most of it. Also the “prequel” or whatever you want to call the first story before this “sequel” pretty much had Fleetfoot wanting to be rutted into oblivion before the human dude talked her down. Well at least that’s from what I remember from it... I’ll have to go over it again because I forgot much of it since it’s been that long mind you.
Still in this stories beginning chapter it just felt a little odd how Fleetfoot was acting given the prior story. So I was somewhat confused by her reaction to the supposed act they had done. I am waiting till he gets back to that part so I can see just what happened. I can see the route this writer is going. Having the event happen then write about the events leading up to what’s finally going to happen to give us some real reason to see what going on between these two.
And that’s fine really. I just think a lot are here just to read about the part when they actually have sex. Because you know... horse pussy and all that I guess.
Just did a tight binge of this story from start to present, and I gotta say I'm enjoying it. Haven't read Damage Control, but from what I've seen in OneAmongOthers' comment, I think I'll stick to what you've got here. Great work with your update schedule by the way; lengthy chapters you've got for the time-frame you've been working with.
Here's a deep cut from Fleetwood Mac. Long grey mare. Kinda bluesy with harmonica.
I bet I know what he's coming to grips with. Crossing my fingers.
Spitfire's got a favourite song? you don't say
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I binged it on a fee hours and now I'm out of feels.
I don't understand how this story isn't more popular, it's better written than mine.
This is getting so good.
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I highly recommend Damage Control. It's very in depth, and analytic about Fleetfoot as a character. Plus, if you enjoy Phillip and Fleetfoot's interactions in this story, DC has some of the best back and forth between the two.
Seriously, go read it.
This chapter was great. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see whats going on with Phillip.
Oof, the "We need to talk" response. Something tells me 'they' figured out how he got to Equestria. He was still processing the info when he got Fleety's last letter which solidified the information in his mind.
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
What makes ELO “iffy”? I’d’ve understood if she said Styx - their popularity is fairly divisive - but ELO?
Ugh, he's starting to come off as a beta cuck feminist. Refreshing to see that all the heroes in Equestria are female? Feels wrong about eating meat and deciding to go vegetarian?
This was a very much enjoyable chapter, and quite nice to see how distant letter writing works between friends.
You're Australian aren't you? I knew I recognised 'Mocha Club' from somewhere, then I realised it was from Coffee Club.
come on Freglz
This chapter references too many good songs it keeps interrupting my reading because I have to listen to the songs