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Ha, very nice! I like how their relationship is progressing. Very natural.
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The natural progression of their feelings is what makes this one of my favorites. Nothing seems like another version of anything else I've read here.
Additionally, this was one of the best 'boop' reactions I've seen
I like ho we it just flows naturally.
A touching chapter. I'm glad they're proceeding the way they are.
My god, what is this?! Two members of the opposite sex having a reasonable discussion where they acknowledge their feelings and work through their issues like grown-ass adults? What is this strange notion?!
...granted, we know that in this case it doesn't work in the long run, but it's nice that they at least tried to tackle it head-on.
Thank you for the wonderful chapter!
Ugh. This story was actually enjoyable to read, then chapter 17 put a shotgun barrel in its mouth and pulled the trigger.
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a bit melodramatic ya think? what exactly is your issue with that one?
Did I miss something in a previous chapter? Is she nursing some self-protective emotional distance with him for not being open with difficult stuff since he cut off contact with her after the Celestia incident? Does she not want him to reciprocate out of fear she could (inadvertently) get hurt?
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I didn't get this vibe specifically, I think he just defaults to being protective or guarded with women because of his close relationship with his sister. Losing her has screwed with him the most, and he seems to have clamped onto to Fleet like a life preserver (or anchor).
Generally I'm finding this fic to be the best slow-burn romance on the site, without stretching or filler. You've got two very emotionally disfunctional individuals clinging together and I love every stupid line these dorks utter in their guileless, guarded but heartfelt courtship (mostly Fleet's internal monologue but still).
And there goes Fleetybee being an absolutely adorable cutie patootie. Poor bastard is going to need some help after tacked heavily into water.
This isn't just a slow-burn romance.
It's atomic-decay romance.
Yeah. Wings are a bitch if you forget about 'em, and that goes quadruple for a 'Bolt.
THANK YOU!!! Lol, this guy gets it.