Four-dimensional horses are the best horses
A young mare from stable 64, a bunker with too few resources and a dictatorial overmare, finds secrets from the war that could change the course of history. Her deep interest in technology and science leads her down a path of curious discovery.
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What is this, a Fallout: Equestria fanfic rated E? I must be dreaming!
((I’ll read it, though, I’m just surprised it’s rated E.))
After reading chapter 1, I see a few grammar mistakes. I’m not going to bother typing them here, just be aware they exist.
Also, I didn’t know Twisted’s name and gender until halfway through the story, please fix that, have Twisted say her name at the beginning or something.
Otherwise, the story is simply half-decent, nothing special or horrible about it. However, I advise you continue writing it, there’s a lot of potential here.
Also, put an Alt. Universe tag on this story, the original FO:E has an Alt. Universe tag, so this one should have one too.