Comments? FANTASTIC as usual! Criticisms? Nope! Perhaps slightly longer chapters; the dialogue makes it pass far too quickly! (personal preference I suppose.)
“Good luck with that while playing this game,” Maud said flatly.
HAH!
Starlight smirked at the slightly crestfallen look on her childhood friend’s face, “Got a bit of a fetish there, Sunburst?” Sniggering at his splutters as he vainly tried to deny it, she flipped over the next card, “What’s there a ton of in heaven… spectacular abs.”
I mean, probably.
Starlight opened her mouth to say something scathing, then closed it as she realized he had her there.
HAH!
“I guess if you’ve had foals you’ve already gotten laid,” Maud replied.
Fair enough.
“So… just behave like ourselves?” Starlight asked.
Basically.
“Twilight wanted reference material for her books and she didn’t want to try and sneak into Trixie’s wagon while she slept, too many explosives,” Starlight replied.
HAH!
The was a puff of smoke and suddenly Trixie’s hat and cloak were gone, replaced with a miniskirt, blouse and tie. A stereotypical slutty schoolgirl outfit.
I am not surprised she has that.
“Gladly,” Sunburst smiled slightly and took off his glasses, setting them down on the blanket as he smoothed out his mane and beard with his magic. When he looked back up his expression had changed, his eyes cold and hard and his mouth set in a grim line. He stood and strode slowly around the group in a tight circle, regarding the three mares with a malevolent sneer that rivaled that of Queen Chrysalis.
I imagine he has the Gendo Ikari shiny glasses.
Sunburst just shrugged, “I don’t really do it very often. It does come in handy when doing bondage play though.”
Beg pardon?
Starlight raised an eyebrow as she thought, “I think that’s actually something Twilight does to her in volume four.”
Beg pardon?
“Next, Equestrian Rail apologizes for the delay in train service due to…” Sunburst flicked over the next card and raised an eyebrow, “Glory-holes.”
How does that work?
“I had crap cards,” Maud deadpanned.
Same.
Sorry about the delay, hopefully once Christmas is out of the way I can really increase my rate of posting for this fic and get started on the sequels/spin-offs.
I gotta ask, why would pony sexually be that weird to humans?
Also I'm both smart enough not to search for the last one's reference in Google but stupid enough to be curious about it. Can anyone give a run down that doesn't make me lose my lunch? Thanks!
9359496 Mares pee to indicate they are receptive. They also do something called 'clitoral winking' which I don't think I need to describe. It also involves a lot of biting
I have only one criticism for you: Stop apologizing for WHEN you release a chapter. This story is amazing and the quality is high. That is good enough.
Grinning at Trixie’s scowl, Starlight pulled out the first question of the round “What’s there a ton of in heaven?” There was a brief rustling of cards before three answers were pushed over to her. Flipping over the first one, Starlight raised an eyebrow as she read out, “Bat-ponies on vacation?” “Bat-ponies?” Sunburst smiled and stroked his beard idly, “I’ll have to work harder on getting into heaven then.”
...I hear you there, Sunny. Winged mares of all kinds...
“Gladly,” Sunburst smiled slightly and took off his glasses, setting them down on the blanket as he smoothed out his mane and beard with his magic. When he looked back up his expression had changed, his eyes cold and hard and his mouth set in a grim line. He stood and strode slowly around the group in a tight circle, regarding the three mares with a malevolent sneer that rivaled that of Queen Chrysalis. “But before I kill you… Miss Do…” Trixie and Starlight unconsciously shuffled closer together at the sound of his voice, a harsh whisper that sent chills down their spines. They both squeaked in fear as he suddenly lunged forward, staring them in the eyes. “I must show you… just how bad my daughter fucked up her dance recital.”
...Holy horseapples, he can really pull that off...
9359278 Read more carefully, he removed his glasses before doing the thing.
9889194 You mean the spell that explicitly doesn't exist? Granted, the mare who claimed said nonexistence also did so about things that had just happened right in front of her in two separate episodes by that point...
Comments? FANTASTIC as usual!
Criticisms? Nope! Perhaps slightly longer chapters; the dialogue makes it pass far too quickly! (personal preference I suppose.)
That, last card.
If I didn't have an upset stomach right now, I do now.
... I could totally imagine this Sunburst in the Clocktower society now ...
Woohoo! New Chapter! And this was pretty funny, hopefully Maud can regain her tie.
WOW, this was great. Very fun round. Can't wait for more
love this story is is funny.cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/474643182102118401/499382970658979870/Shooting_approved.png
Villain Sunburst is beautiful.
I love this so much!
This is fucking hilarious more pls
This is a nice and relaxing fun thing to read. It's like being there with them and just hanging out. Great characterization.
HAH!
I mean, probably.
HAH!
Fair enough.
Basically.
HAH!
I am not surprised she has that.
I imagine he has the Gendo Ikari shiny glasses.
Beg pardon?
Beg pardon?
How does that work?
Same.
Relax, quality over quantity.
I gotta ask, why would pony sexually be that weird to humans?
Also I'm both smart enough not to search for the last one's reference in Google but stupid enough to be curious about it. Can anyone give a run down that doesn't make me lose my lunch? Thanks!
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Mares pee to indicate they are receptive. They also do something called 'clitoral winking' which I don't think I need to describe. It also involves a lot of biting
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Oh boy that must've been a FUN conversation
I agree, I'd pay good money to be there and see that.
This gave me a good chuckle, Trixie gets so distracted at beating Maud she'll end up losing to Sunburst.
This was honestly probably the best chapter so far. Well done with the cards and reactions.
Most excellent.
Stupid Sexy Sunburst
just the laugh i needed right now. thanks.
I want to see them play the Ubisoft version of Uno. I think it would be funny to watch them try to screw each other over in a virtual card game.
I have only one criticism for you:
Stop apologizing for WHEN you release a chapter.
This story is amazing and the quality is high. That is good enough.
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I'll bear that in mind, thanks!
...I hear you there, Sunny. Winged mares of all kinds...
...Holy horseapples, he can really pull that off...
Well, Maud might be able to help you with that. All you need is that spell to change a mare into a stallion....
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Read more carefully, he removed his glasses before doing the thing.
9889194
You mean the spell that explicitly doesn't exist? Granted, the mare who claimed said nonexistence also did so about things that had just happened right in front of her in two separate episodes by that point...
Shouldn’t that be Elysium?
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Uh, what episode said that gender swap spells don’t exist?
I just want to personally thank you for that.
Fanfic. Now. Please.
Yeah, with the rate you're throwing up, you certainly won't be giving a shit anytime soon.
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season 3 episode 5 Magic Duel
the second trixie episode
Beginning to wonder if Starlight is making up this library, just to mess with Trixie.
This story is amazing I haven’t laughed like this since the 1984 Olympics which I wasn’t even live for
Waaay to kill a boner dead...