it was a nice read would like to see and how this will continue it with other OCs in it would be interesting, the descriptions were nice would wish to have seen more of the identity shifting. the issue that I see you are a little rusty in your writing, as your native language can be felt a lot or you would need an editor maybe.

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Thanks, and I have already planned a continuation to the adventure as it stands.
This would not work, with anything other than OCs, I imagine. I will have to add characters, as I go along and explore the effects and advance the story.

The shift in personality should probably have come out more, if I had set up a different focus.

Sadly, I had to write the story more or less unedited and check the spelling as I was about to publish the story.
I would love to have an editor, who enjoys working on the story.

Ps: Hope you are not dissapointed with how the status is uppdated now. I do not publish the story as complete.