Earning Freedom

by Daxisle

Continuation (Begining of Pt 2.)

Hello everyone.

So... Yea, the sequel made for this story didn't go in the direction I wanted it to, and suffered for it. Heavily.

I know where I messed up, and I acknowledge that it was my fault for not only straying away from the initial premise, but also getting off track on the initial moral of what I was trying to convey. Add to that the fact that I had added characters to juggle in an environment that I had no business writing for, and how much I rushed through it, and yea...

All in all, it failed, and I failed. However, I've come to terms with the fact and moved on from it. Now, I get to (though hopefully avoid) botch this one farther. Don't like it? Too bad, my story.

Comments

[kingmoonwar85]

... what .... ... um... I have adhd ...... baaa