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Avellana


The walls are plotting and the furniture stole my marbles

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It’s been many moons since Celestia banished her sister to the moon, and both Equestria and Celestia have both changed dramatically since.

Celestia, as she has done many nights since, relives the night on which she banished her sister, the ordeal having left it’s mark on her profoundly.

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Hiya! This is my first story, so please forgive me if it’s not the best. I’m not a very competent writer but I’d like to get better.
I hope you enjoy.

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Comments ( 2 )

It's very interesting to see the strides you've made between this story and your current one.

That's not to say that this one is lesser or anything. Actually this one is very impressive as well, it's just you can feel the growth between the two, know what I mean?

Anyway I really liked this. I'll always love well done Celestia/Luna stories and this one is quite good.

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Thank you so much!

I haven’t actually been back to read this since I first uploaded it. I think I understand what you mean, I’d like to think I have made some improvements to my writing from here till now.

I’m glad you enjoyed reading this though :)

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