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Pinkamena666


Just a dude who writes mainly clop with some action and some GrimDark on the side. Also, If you don’t like futa, you may have a bad time here :P ;)

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what so is there sex in this or not id assume so but it has no tag unless you ran out of space

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What are you talking about? Sex is the last of the warning tags.

The first thing I thought when I read the title was nuclear warhead. (The construction of the first Nukes was called The Manhattan Project)

Shrill and Trill

We got a couple'a screamers here. I wonder how many properties down from them you'd have to be to get any sleep on nights they feel frisky?

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Their backstory involves them being failed singers which led them into the fashion business instead. So, you’re close :P

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Let’s not rule anything out yet

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Wait WHAT!?!!? You mean that's a Possibility!!!??? Come on, Dusk Flight can't be that INSANE to have a FRICKIN NUKE of all things, In a GTA-like City!!???? RIght????? :twilightoops: :applejackconfused: :trixieshiftright:

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Let’s not rule anything out yet :pinkiecrazy:

Eris as in r63 Discord? Or Eris, no relation?

Got some pretty incompetent cops here. Shouldn't they be taking watch in shifts?

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Yes, in the most epic plot twist. It’s actually the reason her and Thorn became buddies so there’s plot relevance. Besides I really wanted a Futa villain :P

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Wrong character 😅 I was thinking of The Great Divide. I meant Fray.

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Oh yeah, Fray. But is it just me, or is this Fic gonna be a short story or something?

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Ok. Just thought it was? Because it was escalating so fast. I mean, Coco is ALREADY in the hands of Dusk??!! :facehoof:

The Cops are terrible witness protection!

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Next chapter’s gonna be a big one both in length and importance

Seriously, you aren't kidding with that nuke!? :twilightoops:

I can't believe that Dusk and possibly Shrill/Trill are that crazy enough to try to hold Equestria hostage, and rule it?! :facehoof: :ajbemused:

What about Celestia/Luna, and the Mane Six? Then again, this is a GTA/Saints Row inspired universe. So they would be different.

Also, Midnight and the other cops are sadly killed. So no big repercussions?!

Also, who the heck are Arcane, Fable, and their "family"?!

I feel mixed with this. While I do like that these particular girls/mares have huge tits/boobs.

But one, I don't know these girls? I don't know their story??!!

So far, they act like psychotic, murderous, and possibly demonic sisterhood/"family". And secondly, this seems like random side-story inside a story??!! Basically, this is getting off topic with the main plot.

Like we have switched from a GTA/Saints Row universe-like story, to a horror fantasy with a psychotic, murderous, mercilessly evil, and rather lustful family.

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That's why, when I reordered all the fics, I put The Original Six before this because that sort of explains them better. They'll get more development throughout the Manehattan series as well as their own fics before they become a major part of the main story.

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They are your own demonic pony sister/"family" OC's?

Edit: Holy shit!!!!! I actually looked it up, and found out that they are actually the "original" Elements of Harmony before the Mane Six in your own verse. But, they are somehow got corrupted or something??!!

How the Hell do they even get corrupted by artifacts used for good? How the f*** did the Tree itself screwed that up???!!!

Arcane Rune (Element Of Magic), Rebel Bond (Element Of Loyalty), Fable Fidelity (Element Of Honesty), Grim Glee (Element Of Laughter), Vanity Grace (Element Of Generosity), and Callous Courtesy (Element Of Kindness).

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It was just an idea I had: What if the Tree picked the wrong ponies? or What if the Elements got corrupted?
I already have many plans for the Original Six in the future of this series and beyond.

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Interesting? I'm surprised they haven't met the Mane Six, Starswirl and the Pillars, the Young Six, or Princess Celestia and Luna? Because they are all bearers of the Elements too? How would they all react to your Six Bloody/Lustful, Demonic Mares? ( Especially the Young Six, because they are still kids? )

Dusk Flight's Backup Hideout

Shrill and Trill stood on the rooftop, staring out at the city as the sounds of sirens filled the night air. "She sure knows how to send a message," Trill sighed.

"That she does, my dear Shrill," the purple mare cooed. "And, if what she says is true..."

"If what she says is true, then we'll have way more on our plate than before," the orange unicorn interrupted.

Shrill put an arm around her sister with a smile. "Having second thoughts?"

"No," Trill replied plainly. "Although, I wouldn't be against the idea of a double-cross."

"A backstabbing?" Shrill asked, clapping her hands together. "How wonderful. We could probably run things better than her, anyway."

"There's no denying she's formidable," Trill pointed out. "If we kill her, others will try for her position."

The purple mare chuckled and pinched her sister's cheek. "Then, we'll kill them, too," she cooed.

The orange unicorn gently knocked her sister's hand way. "Yes, we will. But, that would mean getting our hands dirty."

Shrill put an arm around the orange mare. "Don't worry. We'll think of something. We always do."

Trill nodded with a light smile, pushing her glasses up on her nose. "That we do, sister. That we do."

Uh oh! BAD Idea!

"Right," Soarin muttered, backing away from the mares before turning and heading out the door. "That was easier than expected," he muttered to himself as he left.

Arcane waited for him to leave before looking at Vanity. "Were you able to make a copy?"

Vanity nodded. "Of course."

Arcane smiled and headed back up the stairs. "I want to see. Everything needs to be perfect for the plan to work."

I have a feeling that they are not done in this story?

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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