While Coco Pommel is heading home, she stumbles upon a bag of drug money belonging to the Nightcrawler gang's leader, Dusk Flight. Now, Soarin and Vapor must protect the fashion designer until the dangerous gang leader is stopped...
I feel mixed with this. While I do like that these particular girls/mares have huge tits/boobs.
But one, I don't know these girls? I don't know their story??!!
So far, they act like psychotic, murderous, and possibly demonic sisterhood/"family". And secondly, this seems like random side-story inside a story??!! Basically, this is getting off topic with the main plot.
Like we have switched from a GTA/Saints Row universe-like story, to a horror fantasy with a psychotic, murderous, mercilessly evil, and rather lustful family.
11068748 That's why, when I reordered all the fics, I put The Original Six before this because that sort of explains them better. They'll get more development throughout the Manehattan series as well as their own fics before they become a major part of the main story.
They are your own demonic pony sister/"family" OC's?
Edit: Holy shit!!!!! I actually looked it up, and found out that they are actually the "original" Elements of Harmony before the Mane Six in your own verse. But, they are somehow got corrupted or something??!!
How the Hell do they even get corrupted by artifacts used for good? How the f*** did the Tree itself screwed that up???!!!
Arcane Rune (Element Of Magic), Rebel Bond (Element Of Loyalty), Fable Fidelity (Element Of Honesty), Grim Glee (Element Of Laughter), Vanity Grace (Element Of Generosity), and Callous Courtesy (Element Of Kindness).
11068828 It was just an idea I had: What if the Tree picked the wrong ponies? or What if the Elements got corrupted? I already have many plans for the Original Six in the future of this series and beyond.
Interesting? I'm surprised they haven't met the Mane Six, Starswirl and the Pillars, the Young Six, or Princess Celestia and Luna? Because they are all bearers of the Elements too? How would they all react to your Six Bloody/Lustful, Demonic Mares? ( Especially the Young Six, because they are still kids? )
I feel mixed with this. While I do like that these particular girls/mares have huge tits/boobs.
But one, I don't know these girls? I don't know their story??!!
So far, they act like psychotic, murderous, and possibly demonic sisterhood/"family". And secondly, this seems like random side-story inside a story??!! Basically, this is getting off topic with the main plot.
Like we have switched from a GTA/Saints Row universe-like story, to a horror fantasy with a psychotic, murderous, mercilessly evil, and rather lustful family.
11068748
That's why, when I reordered all the fics, I put The Original Six before this because that sort of explains them better. They'll get more development throughout the Manehattan series as well as their own fics before they become a major part of the main story.
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They are your own demonic pony sister/"family" OC's?
Edit: Holy shit!!!!! I actually looked it up, and found out that they are actually the "original" Elements of Harmony before the Mane Six in your own verse. But, they are somehow got corrupted or something??!!
How the Hell do they even get corrupted by artifacts used for good? How the f*** did the Tree itself screwed that up???!!!
Arcane Rune (Element Of Magic), Rebel Bond (Element Of Loyalty), Fable Fidelity (Element Of Honesty), Grim Glee (Element Of Laughter), Vanity Grace (Element Of Generosity), and Callous Courtesy (Element Of Kindness).
11068828
It was just an idea I had: What if the Tree picked the wrong ponies? or What if the Elements got corrupted?
I already have many plans for the Original Six in the future of this series and beyond.
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Interesting? I'm surprised they haven't met the Mane Six, Starswirl and the Pillars, the Young Six, or Princess Celestia and Luna? Because they are all bearers of the Elements too? How would they all react to your Six Bloody/Lustful, Demonic Mares? ( Especially the Young Six, because they are still kids? )
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Oh you’ll see
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Oh boy!