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Equestria Girls Fan 94


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During World War II, a young demon boy was summoned to Earth to upset the balance of the war by German soldiers. But instead, he was rescued and raised by good men of the Allies. They raised him to be a good person and fight for Humanity. It was that very day that the Bureau of Paranormal Research and Defence began. They named this demon child...Hellboy!


But, in an alternate timeline, in the world of Equestria, the evil King Sombra summoned an alternate version of this child for himself. By the time the demon child was brought into the pony world, Princesses Celestia and Luna had arrived with their small army to defeat him. The two rulers had banished Sombra and all was well.

They found the young child, who was transformed into a small red colt with two horns and a giant stone hoof. One of the soldiers suggested that they raise him, teach him all about right and wrong. The princesses agreed.

Since then, the rulers of Equestria had created the heroic organization known as the Supernatural Police Department(S.P.D.) Raised by former Royal Guard, Bold Helm, the young colt grew up to be Equestria's greatest hero. They named him....Hellcolt!

Many years later, Hellcolt teams up with the Mane 6, the Wonderbolts and one of Luna's Night Guard to fight a powerful evil that has come to conquer Equestria. It's time for our favourite demon hero to give the bad guys a little bit of hell!


Cover image is owned by Creepy99 on Deviantart; https://anime-94.deviantart.com/art/Ponified-Hellboy-311802921

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Have you seen the two Hellboy films directed by the great Guillermo del Toro?

i think they are going by the comic books.

Holy shit. You actually listened, I guess I should read, as this sited premier Hellboy fan I am obligated to read it. :P

Great start. Looking forward to more!

*sees title*
go on....

i'll read this when you have four chapters going but if you have hellboy....er i mean hellcolt than i bet it's going to be awesome.:twilightsmile:

Rainbow Dash butted in. "Yeah, AND he works for this super awesome organization called the Supernatural Police Department! The S.P.D for short! They even say that the founder of the Wonderbolts was an agent of the S.P.D! So, the Wonderbolts are part of the S.P.D and so are the Royal Guard! I'm a Wonderbolt so there for, I'M a part of the S.P.D!!! So awesome!"

SPD Emergency! 2! SPD Blue Ranger! :rainbowdetermined2:
Sorry couldn't resist anyway looks like good start could actually hear Pearlman's voice for Hellcolt's lines which seem pretty spot on.
A few grammer issues but not enough to distract from the story though i have to wonder how Red's dad lived for a thousand years. Side effect of a mission?

Why isn't there a Wonderbolts tag?

Of all the dumbass ways you could put Hellboy in equestria this is how you did it...neat

The gargoyle landed on him, pinning him down. It used its tail to snatch his dagger away from him. He struggled and struggled, but no good. "Okay, you're clearly smarter than you look." he said.

Hellboy tends to use the older "All right" instead of "okay/O.K." due to his appearance on Earth at the end of World War II and him using the speech patterns of a 1950's american blue collar army man.

"Come on, Sugercube. Don't be like that. Does it matter weather or not this organization or this 'Hellcolt' is real?" AJ said, being the voice of reason.

"It DOES matter, Applejack." Twilight said as she resumed to walk on. "I mean, come on. A demon pony, walking around protecting ponies from his own kind? A secret group of monster hunters that the princesses created? It's absurd."

RD pouted in boredom. "It could be possible." she said, earning a glare from Twilight.

"Face it, Rainbow Dash. Hellcolt.....he isn't real."

And this Twilight Sparkle is why you are a terrible scientist. :facehoof: When confronted with the absurd you do not investigate it, you dismiss it.

"...Hellcolt." Bold said to the young colt.

The soldier readied the camera and said, "Smile!" and took the picture.

Really? Photography a thousand years ago? That sort of knocked me out of my suspension of disbelief, a bit. And this is me we are talking about!

Overall it's good you got reds personality down, though it you naming the gun as if it were a strange and bizarre weapon is a bit odd. I know that guns are not seen in Equestria due to the Hasbro and American TV child tv standards, and the fear of another moral panic. Early cannons can be seen in the European battlefields as far back as the thirteen and fourteen centuries. Guns while illegal in Equestria are probably not exactly that unknown specially considering how Rainbow Dash talks about bullets.

Though the Wonderbolt's have proven themselves to be too incompetent to possibly survive a day dealing with paranormal threats, like they honestly would have to replace the Wonderbolts constantly to compensate how often they would die....

But oh well, nicely done.

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Read the comics and look up Hellboy's intros for injustice 2

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I figured someone would make that Power Ranger reference sooner or later. It's okay, thought.

Also, his father, Bold Helm, does not live up to present Equestria. No spoilers; let's just say...the Princesses took care of him ever since.

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oh okay so does he see them as aunts?

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Maybe. We'll see.

Plus, like he did with Liz, Hellcolt will have feelings for a certain somepony.

Dude, 2 things. 1, please continue and update soon. And 2, u should try making this into a graphic novel, this would sell great on the internet. I would buy it no matter the price...if it's reasonable price that is, but still buy it.....but seriously, please update soon, u got my attention and interest:twilightsmile:

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Thx for responding and please do u and take ur time:twilightsmile:!!! This is ur story after all!!

An interesting start. A little too much like the first Hellboy movie at the start, but it does its job.

Nice tie in with Gina "Gold" Diggers.

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