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>anthro
Absolute cancer, delete your account
None of your other stories in this "saga" are complete.
Might want to fix that. Also Fall of Equestria is a dead meme, please stop.
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I don't know, but what I do want to know is: WHY?
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Aw come on. I thought we were here to give constructive criticism, not telling others to leave. Even if the story is bad.
maybe if Celestia was any bit of a thinker she'd try to form a plan, take it slow and make it more "consumable" to the ponies... With the way she must look and act they all must think she's utterly insane....
honestly, its been like three stories and the caribou are still facing a tremendous up hill battle... the caribou need something REALLY GOOD if they want equal footing in this fight.
Celestia... you done goofed.
I've only really skimmed the last chapter of this and the previous two as it popped into my feed and got me a little curious about a better, more realistic version of the Fall of Equestria series that doesn't make me just groan at the idiocy of it all, but i can already see Celestia failing to sway Equestria to join her side on this.
i highly doubt any mares are actually willingly going to want to become nothing more than sex slaves, giving up every freedom they had, just for sex. Daiin can't get to the Crystal Heart to corrupt it this time (without that feeling incredibly forced anyway), so the ponies are all in their right minds (aside from Celestia), so Celestia just saying what is expected of mares is not going to bring them to her side. Some of the male populace? Well, duh. of course there are males in Equestria who would be more than happy for their society to change so all women were obedient sex slaves.
Luna will have every logical Equestrian behind her and, even if some don't want to join her, she can use her power of dream persuasion to get them to join her. that latter is a serious advantage Luna has that Celestia does not.
and i highly doubt Cadance will be willing to subject her own daughter to the world Celestia is suggesting, so the Empire will be on Luna's side too,
not to mention all their allies, the yaks, the griffons, the Hypogriffs, the kirin, the changelings.
Yeah, Celestia is going to be fighting a losing battle.
If Daiin's plan was to have Equestria destroy itself to the point it could easily be taken over... he clearly underestimates how many mares DON'T want to be sex slaves. i'd say maybe Celestia will have a third of Equestria on her side (and that's being INCREDIBLY generous), with the rest being on Luna's side.
either way, this will not go as easily as Daiin wants. and i'm glad for it