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Daring Starburst


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Twenty years ago, ancient enemies from Equestria's past began returning. But the wielders of the Elements of Harmony—Loyalty, Laughter, Honesty, Generosity, Kindness, and Magic—valiantly defeated them one after another.

Until Grogar came along.

Tangerine's a young Earth pony investigating the secrets behind the Elements and their magic. But he'll soon learn that the world—and Harmony itself—are much grander and more complex than he's ever imagined.


Cover art was done by me, but was made using the artwork of BB-K and SpiritofthwWolf on DeviantArt.


Tags may change as the story goes along.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

This is pretty good

Oooh. I'm liking this. These sorts of stories intrigue me... in fact, I'm currently writing one with a similar premise. But it's not too similar, so it's all good. ;) I can't wait to see how this turns out!

Where have I heard that villions name before?

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Grogar's one of the most dangerous villains from MLP G1.

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Thanks! I look forward to seeing your story too!

It is clearly visible that you have been enjoying devising and writing this story! It reads nicely, promises an interesting world to explore and a likeable main character. I’m looking forward to the next chapter and to seeing how you handle Tangerine’s abilities and prodigious future.

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