I Dont know much about myself. I'm sorry.
The Mare Do Well comes out of retirement to kill Breaburn, the anarchist, and diamon tiara, the diamond thief. (Who is after more than just diamonds, might I add). It features he return of comissioner shining armor, the revenge of pinkie, the jker, and the man of legend, little strong heart as bane. I pretty much made this as a tribute to my favorite movie ever, The dark knight rises.
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I don't even need to open up any chapters to see that you clearly are half arsing this. This is a poorly thought out mess written by someone who has probably never heard the words 'grammar', 'punctuation', 'capitalisation', or 'spell check', and we haven't even gotten through the description yet!
Please, if you have any interest in continuing to write. Please, for the love of Celestia, invest in a writing style guide.
"The Mare Do Well comes out of retirement to kill Breaburn, the anarchist..."
Since when was anarchist a bad thing? I think I'll pass.
I opened the first chapter... I couldn't get past the first few lines with out seeing all the grammar mistake. They're very obvious ones like capitalization, and at one point your spell mares as mar3s. I'm not even going to rate this, because I'm not sure what to make of it since I haven;t read it. Please, if you want to do this, re write it with good grammar. That's all I ask. And why aren't Breaburn and Diamond Tiara listed as main characters if they're the main villains?
The Dark Knight Rises was a really good movie.
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Eeyup 
it isnt really a bad thing, but in the movie they portray it as such.
have you seen the movie? becasue this fic is intended for those who have seen it.
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No sh*t sherlock. LOL.
Keep practicing and some day maybe you'll be as good a writer as D'arkYagam'i himself!
1064498 I dont know what the cunt your tslking about, or what you think of ,y stories. I know im not tolkien, but i try to provide a compelling experience to mmy viewers. Im glad my stories are memorable to you. I like to make stories that are impactful to viewers like this.
Another trollfic to add to my collection. DELISIOSO! 10/10, down-voted.
This is literally Hitler.
I don't even know what to say here. If this was meant to be a trollfic then you get a 10/10. If it wasn't, it gets a CELESTIA HELP US ALL. How this even passed moderation is beyond me.
Trollfic or not, this shit is genuinely funny. Upvoting.