967405 its not that. ive been getting these predictions that are oh so off that its not even funny anymore. some were accurate, but an orgy? does it really sound like twilight is willing to do that?............
967539 i dont think this is serious comments about the story. oh, and i am not new. she went insane, but i never saw her abuse her friends, just make a few fillies fall in love with a doll.
967450 An OC X-Men/Avenger in Equestria after catching a lavender pony with a horn falling from a portal. Sorry that I derp on the spelling I doing this on my cell phone. You could lose a large reader and gain a thumbs down for that shit.
967588 lacking in twilight, I make up for in a good romance. this story is a romance. the good parts will be coming soon. dont be discouraged by my current lack of twilight characterizations.
I'm just putting this out there. *AHEM*!! You do not have to love a girl/mare to appreciate a fiiiiinee ass. Except for Fluttershy. Her essence of purity and innocence MUST BE PRESERVED AT ALL COSTS!!!
967428 967500 967526 Because Twilight exploring her friends' feelings for her is so much more crazy than the fact that they're all mentally slobbering over her ass in the first place. What did you think we would expect when you wrote a whole chapter about that in a mature-rated fic? Don't lead us on like that, man!
968267>>968299>>967516>>967387 (This is said in a very calm tone of voice. Not mad.) Alright! The only reason this is in the mature category is because of future events that will occur between Twilight and Dawning Light. If your still clinging to the hope of there being any incest, and orgy, any Twi gone wild, or anything like that, drop all hope. I intend on making some erotic spells for Twilight and Dawning Light and some sexy chapters for the two later on. I should have known people would miss the point. Ch.4 was intended to be funny. That's why the comedy tag is up. I apologize for the misunderstanding, but did you really think things would turn out all crazy like??? The reason Twilight is getting these powers is because she will handle them responsibly. She won't misuse them.
p.s. The sneak peak isn't sexual. I would have chosen a much better pic if it was.
970260 sorry dr. but celestia is in this one though! and i still plan on finishing up cooling the heat of summer... and then some/ with some twilestia action!
I was making a joke more based around how awkward it would be for Luna/Celestia to know Twilight's late-night escapades with their own mother, than being intimate with them.
968017 Thank you, Art. The songs I feature are what I feel is appropriate for the chapter's mood and feel. Like Oprah's "Book of the Month" club, but for every chapter and 20% cooler.
I can't say that I have a song picked out for the next chapter yet, but I can say that when I do, it'll be a song that has not played on a Top 40/Hits Format radio station.
969796but did you really think things would turn out all crazy like??? Weeeelll, since you already told us this story would blow our minds, things turning out all crazy like wouldn't be too farfetched right?
Seems that all of her friends are being affected. Interesting effects from that night-bound mare. I do certainly hope that she doesn't intend to come to the royal castle.
Part of me is kind of expecting to find out that all the lustful thoughts are due to the spell being filtered through Twilight's dirty imagination and her friends are perfectly innocent.
Table of colored thought texts for each character in this chapter.
Purple = Twilight
Green = Spike
Red = Pinkie
Dark blue = Rarity
Orange = Applejack
Light blue = Rainbow Dash
Light pink = Fluttershy
Please leave positive comments. No bull crap. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Thanks for the feedback.
plot rules equestia!!!!
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Well now.
There be a Twi-orgy a brewin!
967387
Twilight as a telepath.... That gives me an idea for my story. May i use it?
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It's my comment, I cant make bad puns if I want!
Good day sir!
967400 yes, but don't steal my OC or the events that unfolded the way they did in ch.4 please
967405 its not that. ive been getting these predictions that are oh so off that its not even funny anymore. some were accurate, but an orgy? does it really sound like twilight is willing to do that?............
967410
I was think of using a blotch spell. The story I am writing is a hie with a of mutant from the Marvel univess.
967428
Confound you writers, you drive me to drink!
Always with say stuff like "Or do they!?!?"
967437... come again... i dont speak bad spelling to the highest degree!
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967516 excuse me while i facehoof at the fact that twilight would never abuse her friends like that.
967539 i dont think this is serious comments about the story. oh, and i am not new. she went insane, but i never saw her abuse her friends, just make a few fillies fall in love with a doll.
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If I had a super power, I would love to read people's minds. *after reading this* you know what, invisibility sounds waaay cooler
967580 eh, invisibility can be a bitch! see the movie hollow man
967450
An OC X-Men/Avenger in Equestria after catching a lavender pony with a horn falling from a portal.
Sorry that I derp on the spelling I doing this on my cell phone. You could lose a large reader and gain a thumbs down for that shit.
I dont know why but i keep imagining a letter to celestia from twilight reading dear princess celestia im bucking your mother
967647 Ah. Sorry. I'm a writer. Spelling is big to me, even in comments. I wasn't trying to be mean, more like sarcastic.
967706 oh really?
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967588 lacking in twilight, I make up for in a good romance. this story is a romance. the good parts will be coming soon. dont be discouraged by my current lack of twilight characterizations.
btw, to all... SNEAK PEAK!
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Wow, that was quite, well..., unexpected. I usually see stories where only one of the Mane 6 has the hots for Twily, but all 5 at once? Simply divine!
Unbelievably, I do have a song for this chapter as well!: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A5jfl9rP2vk
Twilight's friends will definitely come back on and on like a boomerang for her!
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MUDDLED HOMONYMS!!
MUDDLED HOMONYMS EVERYWHERE!!
Wondered into town => Wandered into town.
Be a deer => Be a dear
Bag of flower => Bag of flour.
968077 WOOPS!
967787 lol that pic
968125 lol your reaction...
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967575
You didn't think the Want It Need It spell was limited to ONLY inanimate objects... did you...?
967821
Sneak peek...
So... Twi's going to be bucking Luna's mother... as well as Luna herself...
That's kind of awkward...
Twi hasn't met Celestia and Luna with her new ability yet. Who knows the Orgy could bigger still.
I'm just putting this out there. *AHEM*!! You do not have to love a girl/mare to appreciate a fiiiiinee ass. Except for Fluttershy. Her essence of purity and innocence MUST BE PRESERVED AT ALL COSTS!!!
Love this Chapter! I ask myself, what Twillight will get from Dawning Light next!
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Because Twilight exploring her friends' feelings for her is so much more crazy than the fact that they're all mentally slobbering over her ass in the first place. What did you think we would expect when you wrote a whole chapter about that in a mature-rated fic? Don't lead us on like that, man!
968267>>968299>>967516>>967387 (This is said in a very calm tone of voice. Not mad.) Alright! The only reason this is in the mature category is because of future events that will occur between Twilight and Dawning Light. If your still clinging to the hope of there being any incest, and orgy, any Twi gone wild, or anything like that, drop all hope. I intend on making some erotic spells for Twilight and Dawning Light and some sexy chapters for the two later on. I should have known people would miss the point. Ch.4 was intended to be funny. That's why the comedy tag is up. I apologize for the misunderstanding, but did you really think things would turn out all crazy like??? The reason Twilight is getting these powers is because she will handle them responsibly. She won't misuse them.
p.s. The sneak peak isn't sexual. I would have chosen a much better pic if it was.
to all
i'm a writer. leading you all on is my specialty.
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969796
Oh well, off to breakfast!
Mine was mostly a joke too, I fine it funny to be a bit silly.
For I have shamed myself, I must comet seppuku!
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Twilestia or GTFO!!
Unexpected Thought aka Everypony is gay for Twilight (double meaning there huh lol)
Twilight needs to learn how to use her gift responsibly it seems.
970260 sorry dr. but celestia is in this one though! and i still plan on finishing up cooling the heat of summer... and then some/ with some twilestia action!
970318 wait for ch.5 please.
969796 969809
I was making a joke more based around how awkward it would be for Luna/Celestia to know Twilight's late-night escapades with their own mother, than being intimate with them.
970260
NOOOOOOOO!!!
970482 right, i got that.
968017
Thank you, Art. The songs I feature are what I feel is appropriate for the chapter's mood and feel. Like Oprah's "Book of the Month" club, but for every chapter and 20% cooler.
I can't say that I have a song picked out for the next chapter yet, but I can say that when I do, it'll be a song that has not played on a Top 40/Hits Format radio station.
970943 im working on the next chapter right now, but it will take some time.
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Oh well at least something
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969796 but did you really think things would turn out all crazy like??? Weeeelll, since you already told us this story would blow our minds, things turning out all crazy like wouldn't be too farfetched right?
MOAR!!!
Seems that all of her friends are being affected. Interesting effects from that night-bound mare. I do certainly hope that she doesn't intend to come to the royal castle.
Part of me is kind of expecting to find out that all the lustful thoughts are due to the spell being filtered through Twilight's dirty imagination and her friends are perfectly innocent.