Ahhh, I can imagine it, Celestia or Luna holding court, when Twilight suddenly teleports herself to them, asking for something and they just answer:"But mooom, can't you see I'm busy?" with the whole room hearing the conversation. I just had to get that out of my head, although it is pretty silly.
1018998 technically she already knows about that. princess celestia explained this to her already, but i will give a better reaction to it next chapter.
1019037 They see me writing, they liking, they know that I am a pony author! Know I am a pony author. They know I'm a pony author. Things are about to get even hotter!
Sorry, just listening to Weird Al and I had to do that.
1019113 Yep! Will do! I feel great now that I'm back from vacation. I think I might just be able to write a new chapter by tomorrow night! Well... Maybe that's pushing it.
1019125 well, you didn't disappoint me, but you certainly made me more excited to find out how the story ends!
and as far as i can tell, there was nothing wrong with it, except that it seemed to end off a little too soon... but that's just me, and i know that you'll keep up the good work!!!!!
1019404 YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT!!!!! i love all of your stories, you my friend, are amazing... when i saw in my email that this had updated, i started giggling and laughing maniacally... i seriously cant wait. thank you for coming up with this spectacular story... chapter 4 was funny as hell i must say, i had never laughed so hard in my life but you my good friend are a spectacular writer, and i hope this story goes on for a long time... thank you...
hey, do me a favor. tell Bono MLP BRONY 27 says hi
1019446 of course. i guess you might take the cake as my #1 fan. its encouraging to know my story is so successful in your's, as well as everyone's else' eyes.
1019475 i am your number 1 fan and by the way, your stories are the greatest i have ever read, i love all of your work, hell, i even have all of your fanfics saved to my iphone so i can read them wherever i go, you rock!!!
1019489 aww... come on... i cant be that awesome. i've had my fair share of failed stories... there might be one of those coming up soon. i tried my hand at a crossover between the infamous game and mlp... i doubt it will be very good.
1019510 you are even more awesome than that... and if its an art inspired fic, i know it will be good, confidence is the key and you are the BEST OF THE BEST!!!!
1019541 well im glad i could make that happen, i just want to say this. there are not enough compliments in the world to describe how awesome you are. YOU ARE THE HUMAN EQUIVALENT OF RAINBOW DASH!!!
This chapter really had me on edge when Luna started attacking Dawn (how I refer to "Dawning Light") and looked like she was winning. Thankfully, Dawn had a few tricks up her hooves to ensure her survival.
Thank you very much, Art. I think JC Chasez is highly underrated, but his vocals bring impact to the lyrics.
Like I said before, the songs I pick are mostly dance songs not heard on Top 40/Hits radio stations.
In the case of Twily and Dawn's well blossoming relationship, there won't be any peace they seek at night when their bodies are weak from their lovemaking!
What's wrong with your head? You look like you talked to the dead! Your eyes are all funky and red, and it looks as thought they were filled with lead! When's the last time you got fed? Did you sleep in your own bed? I think you slept in some dirty shed .Did you steal drugs from a guy named ted? What's wrong with you head?
Please leave positive comments. Constructive criticism is appreciated. No bull crap comments. Thank you for the feed back.
Wow this was a good chapter, loved how luna acted. Keep up the good work.
1018527... holy shnikies! i JUST published it! you my friend can read WAY to fast!
That was awesome!
sometime sluna can be badass and thats why i like her :)
Ahhh, I can imagine it, Celestia or Luna holding court, when Twilight suddenly teleports herself to them, asking for something and they just answer:"But mooom, can't you see I'm busy?" with the whole room hearing the conversation.
I just had to get that out of my head, although it is pretty silly.
D'aww, it's a happy family....
FOR NOW!!!
1018652 Me too!
1018647 Had an amazing idea for Luna's awesomeness a while ago and had to do this chapter!
1018724 lolz.
It's good, but this chapter seemed a little rushed.
... oh... my ... GOD!!! i did it... 100 LIKES!!! THAT IS ONE HELL OF A FEAT!!! cant contain... overpowering excitement...
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1018926 yea... it was... like it always is
I wonder what luna will think when she finds out about the relationship Twilight has with her mom.
1018998 technically she already knows about that. princess celestia explained this to her already, but i will give a better reaction to it next chapter.
fabulous chapter it was a good read as always
1019037 They see me writing, they liking, they know that I am a pony author! Know I am a pony author. They know I'm a pony author. Things are about to get even hotter!
Sorry, just listening to Weird Al and I had to do that.
Nice! New chapter is great! Keep up the good work Looking forward to the next one.
1019113 Yep! Will do! I feel great now that I'm back from vacation. I think I might just be able to write a new chapter by tomorrow night! Well... Maybe that's pushing it.
1019125
well, you didn't disappoint me, but you certainly made me more excited to find out how the story ends!
and as far as i can tell, there was nothing wrong with it, except that it seemed to end off a little too soon... but that's just me, and i know that you'll keep up the good work!!!!!
1019329
I LOVE THIS!!! WHEN WILL THE NEXT CHAPTER BE UP?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
1019398 possibly by tomorrow night.
1019404 YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT!!!!! i love all of your stories, you my friend, are amazing... when i saw in my email that this had updated, i started giggling and laughing maniacally... i seriously cant wait. thank you for coming up with this spectacular story... chapter 4 was funny as hell i must say, i had never laughed so hard in my life but you my good friend are a spectacular writer, and i hope this story goes on for a long time... thank you...
hey, do me a favor. tell Bono MLP BRONY 27 says hi
1019446 of course. i guess you might take the cake as my #1 fan. its encouraging to know my story is so successful in your's, as well as everyone's else' eyes.
1019475 i am your number 1 fan and by the way, your stories are the greatest i have ever read, i love all of your work, hell, i even have all of your fanfics saved to my iphone so i can read them wherever i go, you rock!!!
1019489 aww... come on... i cant be that awesome. i've had my fair share of failed stories... there might be one of those coming up soon. i tried my hand at a crossover between the infamous game and mlp... i doubt it will be very good.
1019510 you are even more awesome than that... and if its an art inspired fic, i know it will be good, confidence is the key and you are the BEST OF THE BEST!!!!
1019531 your literally starting to make me blush! i didn't think text comments could do that. you proved it to be true.
1019541 well im glad i could make that happen, i just want to say this. there are not enough compliments in the world to describe how awesome you are. YOU ARE THE HUMAN EQUIVALENT OF RAINBOW DASH!!!
1018538
I know, my cutie mark would be a book with a wing.
1020023
This chapter really had me on edge when Luna started attacking Dawn (how I refer to "Dawning Light") and looked like she was winning. Thankfully, Dawn had a few tricks up her hooves to ensure her survival.
After everything in this chapter came to a head with the big reveal to Luna, this song came to mind: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tytvEya2MIo
Luna definitely isn't trying to fight the force of gravity in Dawn's revelations anytime soon!
1020202 interesting. i like the ltrics, where he says "turns to apologies" very symbolic!
[BULL CRAP COMMENT! MUAHAHAHAHA jk this story is amazing ]
you're pretty awesome to have such an idea and share it with us
1021327 So I've heard, but this isn't my only great idea. View my other stories; I here they're pretty interesting!
another great chapter...
1021392 lol, so i've heard!
indeed, like MLp Brony 27 said you have a talent for this.
1021443 Ahhh, the compliments tell me to write, write, write! So what do I do? i crack my fingers and I wri-
SSP: "art"... arent you gonna let me cut your hands tonight? i hear its really fun!
art:... sorry. this will have to wait.
aighnt no problem..
Message for your SSP: Dont forget the webing inbetween the fingers.
Have funn.. Chaos out..
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Thank you very much, Art. I think JC Chasez is highly underrated, but his vocals bring impact to the lyrics.
Like I said before, the songs I pick are mostly dance songs not heard on Top 40/Hits radio stations.
In the case of Twily and Dawn's well blossoming relationship, there won't be any peace they seek at night when their bodies are weak from their lovemaking!
1022450 lol! i had the same thought when i wrote this!
Making Luna the bad guy to apologize to Dawn to break the ice?
Maybe it could have been Luna absorbing her, and Dawn having to switch between Luna and Celly during the night-day.
That way Twilight gets to have sexytime 2 times a day.
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1023040 ssssssss... aaaaaahhhh
1023113
Epilepsy warning so just posting it as a link
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What's wrong with your head?
You look like you talked to the dead!
Your eyes are all funky and red, and it looks as thought they were filled with lead!
When's the last time you got fed?
Did you sleep in your own bed?
I think you slept in some dirty shed
.Did you steal drugs from a guy named ted?
What's wrong with you head?
1023174
Actually read it in my own voice
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Not like im trying to turn all your stories into Twilestia stories...
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1023369 lolz, smoking pinokio! stop me if i spelled his name wrong.
1023371
Its right in both croatian and english i guess
So now that both princesses know about their mother and are cool with it, what will the the driving conflict besides Twilight getting sexytime?
1023416 chysalis! (i think i butchered her name as well)