I found enough time while being on vacation to write ONE chapter... That's all I'll do while I'm here. If you want moar, you'll have to wait. I think my writers block is cleared up though!
1181131 oooo thx -hugs again- oh LOVELY new ava ^_^ im glad you picked the one i voted for (really wishes there was a smiling Fluttershy instead of the Flutteryay emote)
1181193 well i'm glad to hear that you won't Blaspheme in the most dirtiest of ways by making a chapter only an Author's note so how goes the Vacation? is it going good? bad? meh?
PS: i read that in Rarity's offended voice at first o-o
1181208 yeah... i did make it sould like rarity, didn't i. uh, vacation... FANTASTIC!!! me and mny SSP have been having a BLAST! i mean, the entire experience has been... what's the three main words of pleasure? lust, bliss and sublime... take those words, fuse them together and you'll have a glimpse of just how awesome this has been!!!
"the ripples in this waterfall mock my existence and life..." capital T instead of lower case. Also, I'm glad you wrote one chapter during your vacation, thank you
1181250 "SSP" ?? im new to the site kinda.. i joined about a bit over a month ago... also the word you are looking for is Euphoric
and right now i am laughing my ass off 'casue of the fact that in another story i read Pinkie Pie asked for a word meaning great pleasure and Twilight gave the answer Euphoric.. and you used a pinkie pie emote while i just used a Twily emote -giggles-
-took the time to look at your profile finally- i feel special now... also i'll let you get back to your SSP ^_^ go enjoy yourselves and don't stay on the computer for to long!! it will just make your brain go to mush -giggles-
Twilight is now a fully grown mare that takes a beautiful figure-> was & took Never has these questions been reviled to any mortal pony and they never would-> had; and I think you meant something along the lines of "Never had the answers to these questions been revealed to any mortal pony..." If I remember it right, to revile something is akin to badmouthing something.
I seen something like this coming for chapter 3 or so......Fine with it.
I would type more about how I like the story, and about how I find it silly how a super unicorn, two demi-goddesses and some more unicorns who - I take it- aren't to shabby, can't at least her hump Twi somewhere not in the Everfree.
I hope it is set like that for a means to a hell of a end....
That kind of really sucked that they could not get Dawn out of the Everfree Forest. It's so sad that many years passed and Dawn is still stuck there. It's hard to describe how I feel about the choice Twily was offered to become an immortal alicorn, but I feel just as conflicted as Twily.
1184543 If you're going to love me, do it when I'm asleep... My soul becomes restless during that time. In the darkness, only shadows comfort my being... Love me when I need that emotion the most, right now... Good night.
this story, i really liked it~ i've liked most of your stories so far. Sure there are a few grammar errors, but even the best of published books have them. i just love reading your stories~.
I found enough time while being on vacation to write ONE chapter... That's all I'll do while I'm here. If you want moar, you'll have to wait. I think my writers block is cleared up though!
i'm glad you were able to get past your writer's block hun -hugs-
1181116 aww, thanks! i edited the other chapters if you'll notice as well.
1181131 oooo thx -hugs again- oh LOVELY new ava ^_^ im glad you picked the one i voted for (really wishes there was a smiling Fluttershy instead of the Flutteryay emote)
1181145 one that looks like this, right?
deviantart.com/download/254347074/fluttershy_smile_trace_by_miami974-d47fjgi.jpg
1181154 -giggles- more like Twilight Smile but with Fluttershy... that kinda looks like Fluttershy is about to go OOC and screw you all night long
this emote btw
PS: when i saw the update in my email i immediately though "if that is an author's note saying that Art will update ASAP I'm gonna scream"
Yay more fabulous chapters and some cleared up writers block
1181184 why i'd NEVER make a chapter an authors note! unless it's short and then jumps right back into the story!
1181193 well i'm glad to hear that you won't Blaspheme in the most dirtiest of ways by making a chapter only an Author's note so how goes the Vacation? is it going good? bad? meh?
PS: i read that in Rarity's offended voice at first o-o
1181208 yeah... i did make it sould like rarity, didn't i. uh, vacation... FANTASTIC!!! me and mny SSP have been having a BLAST! i mean, the entire experience has been... what's the three main words of pleasure? lust, bliss and sublime... take those words, fuse them together and you'll have a glimpse of just how awesome this has been!!!
"the ripples in this waterfall mock my existence and life..." capital T instead of lower case. Also, I'm glad you wrote one chapter during your vacation, thank you
1181253 woops, missed that... okay, it's fixed!
1181250 "SSP" ?? im new to the site kinda.. i joined about a bit over a month ago... also the word you are looking for is Euphoric
and right now i am laughing my ass off 'casue of the fact that in another story i read Pinkie Pie asked for a word meaning great pleasure and Twilight gave the answer Euphoric.. and you used a pinkie pie emote while i just used a Twily emote -giggles-
1181261 SSP ~Special SomePony~
1181275 ah~
-took the time to look at your profile finally- i feel special now... also i'll let you get back to your SSP ^_^ go enjoy yourselves and don't stay on the computer for to long!! it will just make your brain go to mush -giggles-
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1181257 The grammar Nazi inside me can finally relax.
Man, this chapter was kinda depressing.
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1181329 ... you say it like it wasn't to come. i thought you'd learn by now that this is my style of writing, it only gets sadder as it progresses
1181333 It reminded me of my own mortality and that stuff.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/eenope.png
Cool new avatar, and a great chapter to match..
STOP MAKING ME FEEL LIKE A HUMAN BEING WITH FEELINGS!
Hmm i would say she will go with immortality just to continue trying to save Dawn, but... your the author you probably already know what will happen.
Twilight is now a fully grown mare that takes a beautiful figure-> was & took
Never has these questions been reviled to any mortal pony and they never would-> had; and I think you meant something along the lines of "Never had the answers to these questions been revealed to any mortal pony..." If I remember it right, to revile something is akin to badmouthing something.
I seen something like this coming for chapter 3 or so......Fine with it.
I would type more about how I like the story, and about how I find it silly how a super unicorn, two demi-goddesses and some more unicorns who - I take it- aren't to shabby, can't at least her hump Twi somewhere not in the Everfree.
I hope it is set like that for a means to a hell of a end....
That
kind ofreally sucked that they could not get Dawn out of the Everfree Forest. It's so sad that many years passed and Dawn is still stuck there. It's hard to describe how I feel about the choice Twily was offered to become an immortal alicorn, but I feel just as conflicted as Twily.I found this song that would make it easier to describe what's going through Twily's mind: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EHYWOriO_MM
Can Twily make the right choice? All I can say is that it definitely feels like she's falling from high altitude from this dilemma!
Let me guess. This is an "everyone has a crush on Twilight" fic, right?
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This is why we love you
1184543 If you're going to love me, do it when I'm asleep... My soul becomes restless during that time. In the darkness, only shadows comfort my being... Love me when I need that emotion the most, right now... Good night.
this story, i really liked it~ i've liked most of your stories so far. Sure there are a few grammar errors, but even the best of published books have them. i just love reading your stories~.
1196191thank you! have you read When You Were Young? i liked writing that one the most!
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squee <3 that's my favorite one so far~ i'm eagerly awaiting a new chapter~!
The moment I saw that picture this song ran though my head;
Oh man dis Cliffhanger is killing me Very Entertainig story Bro