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You're the medic, you literally have second highest priority Above Nyota and Below Sunrise to the party to keep alive!
Anyway this is awesome! To see another story spawned off our RPG story is awesome and not something I entirely expected. This is both surreal and quite amazing.
Not to mention the writing isn't bad. Can't wait to read the next one.

I'll link this in the Authors notes on the next chapter of the Sunrise version.

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Thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. The next ones are probably going to wind up a lot longer since he spent most of this one fixing up the needler while the plot was happening elsewhere.

I enjoyed the read, thanks for your perspective on events and I hope you can continue it.

This was kind of awesome! I had never considered how terrifying it is to be the medicine in combat. You actually have to watch them die or be near death and if you mess up. You are going to blame yourself.

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I'm starting to realize there's twice as much to pay attention to when I need to keep track of both sides of an encounter.

The box dislike is real, but anyhow I really like this.

This is a good first run and I like the differing perspective keep it up!

This was another interesting take on the medics PoV, keep at it!

I thought it was about time I know a little of the history of the Doc.

There is nothing wrong with the length of the story. It not to much to read in one setting. But it give you enough story to want more next time.

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