I swear these delays aren't intentional
I can safely say that when I gave my sister that spell book I ordered online I was not expecting this.
Nor was I expecting what came next, or who I'd meet.
Basically this is the story of how my life went completely off the rails.
Now with a sequal: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/397362/magical-experiments-and-why-you-should-avoid-them
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will there be more?
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I'm interested in doing more if other people are interested in reading it.
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Yes please more.
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It would also be amusing to see their parents reaction to learning their son is now their daughter 
And with the spell book? you could pose the question "How did the book get to the human world" and having Sunset and friends asking the same question and looking into it. Further boy, now will have to deal with the changes in her life while attending school.
Theres so much more you could do with this
This is good as a one shot, but it would be nice to have it continue as a slice of life story as well.
SEAMED! Oh wait those weren't rarity puns. Just mistypes. Nooooo!
Uh... ultrasound is inaudible... and doesn't damage the human ear... and if she got even higher than that, the sound would never leave her mouth (the air won't carry sounds above a certain frequency, has to do with the relationship of the distance between gas particles and the wavelength), and she'd cook herself alive with the energy.
Completely aside from how this story is kinda hard to read... It was very definitely run through spellcheck, though not proofread. Way too many cases where the wrong word (that happens to be a homophone) was used... Such as, since the rest of the above passage is in past tense, it's 'bled' ("her ears bled"), not 'bleed' ("her ears are bleeding")... past vs present tense forms of the word.
But aside from spellcheck's wrongword errors, good story!
Tell me you at least through your drink in his face.