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[Collab with Twalaight Sparkhul]

It wasn’t long before Alex Benton’s life was going to change. He just didn't expect that to be in the form of a four legged, dethroned queen. However, maybe this world was just what he needed. Something far away from the pain of his old life. Something that allowed him to be different. To be helpful.

Crystal Boundaries of a Skull
They hide, they keep, they hold the walls
And once our troubles can't be stalled
The walls will fall
The walls will fall….

(Cover is an edited shot from the finale of Season 6 of FiM: Edited by once again, Twalaight Sparkhul)

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 36 )

This has real potential. Real potential.

Well, I guess I’m on board this train now. Let’s see where it goes!

I don't see tremendous potential as 1st commentator, but I'm intrigued how it all can evolve further.
Don't know what to say about second chapter. May be ok further down the road, but now it paints incomplete and somewhat strange picture.

This feels like an 8-year-old’s show and tell day. 4/10.

Comment posted by Zine deleted Dec 31st, 2017

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Alex is pretty undefined so far as a character. The main goal of Chapter 2 was to try to give him some backstory and show how impulsive he can be, and how he takes issues kinda personally.

As we move on the character development should be a looot smoother and less "in your face". Or at least, that's the goal!

(We're also trying to figure out how to balance co-writing each chapter. At first, AmIDeadInside and I alternated between chapters, but now merging our styles is a bit more difficult than we anticipated.)

The next 3 chapters will be coming out all at once, and might take a bit longer than usual to write.

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Hmm... I really want to see the redemption arc that could come out of this, granted I have no clue what’s going to happen, that’d still be nice, regardless of what actual plot the author(s) have in store.

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I see hesitation... Well, regardless, all aboard the reformation train!

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Uhhhhhh......... that’s quite a bit.

In the meanwhile, read anything good recently? I just finished Firebird Dahlia, and I need something else to take my mind off how useless I am. Fuck, did it again.

Comment posted by Zine deleted Jan 2nd, 2018

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‘Twas the first thing I read off fimfic.

And I assume you are using Google Docs?

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Thank you. I should probably sleep. I'm going to work on Chapter 4 tomorrow. Have fun reading the stories!

Huh, interesting start. I just hope Chryssie wasn't completely overwritten out of something.

Huh, well, that teacher's a dick.

D: I really hope Chryssie wasn't just overwritten.

Ooh, it's going to be really interesting!

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Well, I find this quite enjoyable. I am especially intrigued as to how the sections that take place in Earth tie into this. While it may be on haitus, I can't wait for more.

Comment posted by Zine deleted Aug 17th, 2019
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