Ditzy Doo Lives by Rules she has set up for her self. On a friends suggestion (and against her better judgement) She wrote them down in to what is the most conversational advice book she now knows
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Just want to say that this is THE best Ditzy Doo story I have read in quite a while. You have a very interesting perspective on Ditzy's thinking process, and her yelling conversation at the near end was hilarious. I really do like this, and if you fixed some minor grammar errors scattered throughout, I would like it even more. Keep up the good work!
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I just want to say thank you. This type of comment really makes my day. Not only do you like this story to some extent, but you tell me partly (or completely, I cant speak for you) why. You even point out flaws as well, granted very generally. You sir are awesome.
I shod mention now that my grammar and spelling are...atrocious. This story has been through several spell checks and way to meany proof readings by myself and others (friends,brother). Writing is fun, spell checking is not. I will be trying my hardest to make sure anything I write though is solid. If there is one thing I cant stand: if its hard to read. few hiccups? fine. but full blown bad writing? ugh. full blown bad writing written by YOURSELF!? despicable.
Wow I've been writing this comment for over an hour. that's usually a clue that your trying to hard, thinking about it too much, or really slow. that and you should stop. Sorry for getting a little rant-ish. thanks again.
950296 No prob. You know, one way to help grammar/spelling errors is to read the whole thing aloud. Yeah, it takes a while, but usually you only have to do it once because you'll most likely find everything the first time. Just my two cents.
And yes, I'm not going to dislike/complain about a story just because of a few slip-ups here and there. If it's through the whole story, then I will
Hey, wanna apologize for such a late entry. been buzy with moving stuff. (for any that care) won't happen again...hopefully. and if it does send me a death threat and ill get right on it.
Glad to see you're still working on this. It's still fantastic.
That bit about muffins vs. cupcakes reminded me of what comedian Jim Gaffigan had to say about them. "A muffin is a bald cupcake, and we know it."
Please keep writing this.
This is a little shorter then I wanted it to be, and probably has the most mistakes, and weird spacing issues, and ba-
I'll just let you guys read it. If you find something wrong, just tell me. Ill try and fix it.
Well I meant to read this sooner, and I'm sorry that I didn't, because you've produced another fantastic chapter. I think it's just your matter-of-factness combined with hilarious idiocracy that makes this story, and your writing style, so great. Rule #7 had me laughing the whole time I was reading.
Please, continue in your fine work, monsieur.