When lost in the forest, Sweetie Belle finds a peculiar necklace that seems familiar. Not long after, she meets a strange ghost filly-that needs her help to save the spirit world and possibly all of Equestria!
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Pacing seems a bit too fast...
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Thanks for the feedback, I'll try to slow it down.
If this is your first story, it's wonderful
. You successfully slowed down the pacing, and the story is turning out good, well done 
!
Are these "Screamers" like this one?
horrornews.net/wp-content/uploads/2010/09/Screamers-photo-10.jpg
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No, they're like these:
thelaughingstock.co.uk/acatalog/Scream_Bleeding.JPG