Lyra Heartstrings has been obsessed with humans ever since she was a little filly, and she is striving to find a way to get to a human world to experience that alien world for herself.
Her friends are worried about her behaviour, especially her marefriend Bon-Bon. They have witnessed failures in her experiments, which causes concern that one of those accidents would turn severe towards her and anypony who are misfortunate enough to be near the fallout.
One day, Lyra received an offer from the Princess of Friendship that she had no reason to refuse. She was thrilled to go there to start her new life, but she was afraid that her marefriend would persuade her not to go or destroy that portal.
After an awful argument turned deadly; as a result, the ponies of Ponyville considered her dead, and her body disappeared from existence... is what the general public thinks.
After Lyra realises she has no reason to stay in her old world, she immediately teleported to the world she desired for so long. However, when she got there, she was immediately greeted by a crying human girl who tackled her and said: “I thought you died…”
The first sentence that Lyra said is, “What just happened?”.
Let's see where this story goes. Shall we?
Already hooked, and i need more.
Good job.
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I can try my best but I have like 3 other stories and more making. (one of them is a spin-off of this stories).
But thanks for being the very first comment I ever received on my first released story.
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More. Now. Feed the monster that is my love for this story.
And why does this have the sex and romance tags? There's no sex or romance, and I'd like it to stay that way.
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I'm getting to that. I can't rush character/plot development in the prologue (I'm trying to make sure the next chapters are long and well described for you).
Don't worry, I won't write anything too raunchy or descriptive in the romantic encounters.
And I put the Sex tag for there will be some swearing, sexual innuendo, etc. but not too much. (I'll update the description later).
The main plot will start in a few chapters (I'm currently working on Chapter 1 and 2).
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So any estimates on when they're gonna be done?
I'm itching for another take on "Anthropology".
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Chapter 1 might be done today or tomorrow or on Thursday if I don't get too distracted with my college work and anything else such as eating. (I'm almost to the 2000 words mark as I write this).
I could write the rest at my college but I need to correct them when I get home (I got an app that helps me with that).
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Just wondering, what time zone do you use?
It's 11:26 for me as of writing this, and you're saying it could be done today.
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I live somewhere in Dublin, Ireland and it is 7:28 a.m as I write this.
And there is a possibility I could be done today/ tonight or tomorrow. (I don't sleep well, so the chances are higher).
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Wonderful! I have nothing planned tomorrow, so I can read chapter one ASAP!
This is perfect!
first chapter read you have my attention on to the next
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Oh, that's cool. Thanks.
I remember treading this story a long time ago..
Is this a rewrite?
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Yes, it is.
After many years of rewriting, worrying, improving, and backtracking, I finally got my bearings to write the story once more.
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Ok I read he other side stories are they still connected or be different?
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Always connected or it wouldn't be awesome.
Also, they are not side stories. They are individual stories that have their own plot, characters and problems. They are just in the same universe.
So........ Bon bon killed her?
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Can't say.
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Well look forward to what going to happen.
I take it the rewrite still anon A miss aftermath?
Or be different?
Either way should be good.
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Of course.
I appreciate your anticipation.
Also for the Anon-A-Miss fallout, just let sleeping beasts rest until they are ready.
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Ok and that ls bit...I no idea what you meant LOL
but ok. Take care.