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This was a sweet and tender moment for these two.... really nice! <3
On a sidenote: I would highly recommend you find yourself an editor though! I noticed your tenses were all over the place between past and present tense. An editor, proofreader, or prereader would do you some good! :D
Otherwise, nice and tender moment for the two of them!
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ahh tysm !! i'm fairly new to this site so i wouldnt know where to find an editor, let alone ask anyone! i've actually been told before that i change my tenses, and i thought i've checked over that ! :0 tysm for the criticism
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Hiya!!! I thought this story was really cute. I can be your editor, if you like; tenses are my thing. XD
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oo i rlly appreciate your offer!! if you wouldn't mind proof-reading one of my next stories? can i also ask how that would work? like i mean how i would share my work w you? lmao ijdjf srry
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Yes absolutely!!! Ok here's what you do:
Create the story just like normal, but this time set a password for it so that only people who have the password can view the story. There is a way to do that when you are creating the story. Then send me the link to the story, as well as the password, and then I can read it. :)
And thanks for the follow!
I apologize for not alerting you of this much earlier!
https://youtu.be/FFsCXO-GLxA