This is strangely satisfying...
Anywho, cheers MrWriterWriter~

More plz

I stand by my continuing to have this in my "Yes to more! (please)" bookshelf; more of this story is very "yes want".

*thumbs up*

HAHA! YES! XD You sir are amazing have a like and a favorite!

Oh my god, this is AWESOME. A+, top shelf stuff!

Solid 69/5 stars.

Needed to be said after the last chapter.

This still needs to be continued since it seems Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash want to join in.

I'm glad with Tempest's help, Spike was able to get all of that off his chest.

Honestly after they all apologized most of the group, including Starlight would want to ask for an orgy with Spike.

Good job by the way, keep up the good work.

👍👍

I love when I read chapters like this. Down with hypocrisy.

*inhales deeply* *exhales loudly* its like a breath of fresh retribution air

Write more of TempSpike!!!!!

1st concubine
second!
third I got third!
Wut? me me me me!
Wow!

that's my boy.... Luna quit your laughing!

Definitely need more Tempest x Spike in my life.

Very nice indeed.

Fffffffffuck yes!

We need more of this.

More

Please say that there will be more of this story as I wanna read more of Spike and Tempest and their budding relationship.

I like this story...I like it a lot.

Hands down my absolute new favorite ship. I must have read and re-read this about 8 times already. Saw that there was a update to it and flew to the site to read it. Good on you for adding more to this. Hope to see more out of this as Tempest is my new favorite ex-villain.

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Also... but then who was voices?!

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Seriously, besides the excellent sexy bits, the proper retribution in this writing is fantastic!!! GAH!! I want to see this universe MORE!! Also...kinda curious who the two are that decided to try jumping on the Spike bandwagon...also want to see Twilight deal with her shit properly...and maybe get a permanent clue-by-4 upgrade to her situational awareness. But that's just me.

Well then. We got what we wanted. Now

ARE YOU ALL SATISFIED?

please say there will be more of this

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Rainbow Dash has to be one of the voices. The other could be Pinkie or even Starlight.

DJ WANT MORE !!!!!

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Honestly, when I first read that, I knew the giggling was Pinkie Pie, but I thought the harsh whisper and the word "Yes!" made me really think it's Fluttershy. As a matter of fact, I'm a little surprised that there wasn't any idea of Fluttershy being another of the models for Celestia's Secret, especially when it's revealed that Princess Celestia and Princess Luna pose in them, as well as Rarity being one of the seamstresses that make the lingerie sets...

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Heh, actually that was Spike's reaction to Tempest's choice of sleeping attire.

Sequel?

Glorious! Thank you! Now, can we have more? Kidding. This was well done and damn well deserving of the attention. Now, all you Spike X Tempest shippers! Go now! To your keyboards!

nice chapter. To Be Honest, you might want to consider expanding this into at least a short story. maybe show how the mane 6 correct what they have done, and show how spike and Tempest relationship developes

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I agree. That sound like a really good idea.

Thank you, for another amazing chapter!
Is it me or is, Spike, like the go-to for villains, former villains and/or badgirls?! Because the concept and writing for those stories, most of the time, come out really, really good!

Maybe we should get a new folder for this, if there isn't one already!

The next chapter... Celestia's comment on the event. (somehow she know what happened)

Huh...... I wonder whether or not can this story hit 1000 likes ? Or can this story get a long sequel series?

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Well, it kinda makes sense to me that if a former villian were able to recover/reform, she would have that guy that kinda has been in her shoes...plus the whole thing of mares like Sunset Shimmer, Starlight Glimmer, and/or Tempest Shadow can boast that their lover/boyfriend is an ACTUAL Dragon...

..It just works so well because Spike can see it from both sides, and his unique perspective can see how the girls fell off the wagon but he's there to help them come back on....and they don't even think about that their man is essentially a prince...

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That would be hilarious!! I would love to see how Tempest react to what she did in the movie, and pretty much petrifying the ponies that are essentially his mother, his aunt, and his dear cousin thanks to the Storm King. Just think about that...somehow, Tempest saying something like "Sorry...bout the whole turning into stone thing. I didn't know I was attacking my drake's mom!!" needs to be done somehow...

Even better, be at a point where Spike and Tempest travel to Canterlot, and not just Celestia and Luna are there, but so is Queen Novo and Princess Skystar. (Both of them are obviously back in their hippogriff forms), and then Tempest gets a little...possessive because Princess Skystar has the indications of her having a bit of a crush on Tempest's dragon...

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Well, there is sort of a continuation/sequel in the works.

I'm still on the " Make more please" train. So... more please?

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Then a pair of voices piped up, "So...are you two exclusive?"

I think I speak for all saying that you should turn this into a series.

Why can I only like this once?

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Yes!!

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Yeah. That last line. Perfect!!

Good show!

this story has to be the first I've read that had a cool story to wrap around the sex part.

I honestly can agree with some of these folks, you kinda overstepped your one-shot story boundary here in a spectacular way. yet, I think we all should give Mr. Writerwriter space to decide if he wants this to go any further than what is currently there. I mean, he skilfully addressed the main issue in this story in these two parts which was how Spike wasn't really being included or feeling like he wasn't being included even in the show.

Either way, good job my good colt and may you keep writing on!

that was almost fitting retribution, almost but not quite. also how long until tempest tries anal? can spike get her pregnant in this universe? so many questions.