Nerds Make the Best Nurses

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When Rainbow Dash suffers a knee injury during a soccer match, Twilight Sparkle volunteers to help her recover after surgery. Before they know it, romantic feelings begin to blossom between the athlete and the nerd

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Fallen Star · 18th Oct 2017 · 1,785 words
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Diagnosis · 20th Jan 2018 · 1,338 words
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Operation: Rainbow · 6th Feb 2018 · 695 words
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Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #1 · Oct 19th, 2017 · · · Fallen Star ·

The last sentence in the story sounds incomplete. Was that intentional?

Phoxjes Rome

Phoxjes Rome #2 · Oct 19th, 2017 · · · Fallen Star ·

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If it was, it was likely used as a cliffhanger. If it was not, they likely ran out of time whilst editing the chapter. It happens to us all.

Additional, I never got to thank you, Starlight.

Twihardbookish

Twihardbookish #3 · Oct 20th, 2017 · · · Fallen Star ·

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No, that's how I intended to end it. And yes it was meant as a cliffhanger

livinthelife

livinthelife #4 · Oct 20th, 2017 · 1 · · Fallen Star ·

Before the doors closed, Sunset Shimmer stepped into the back of the ambulance, still holding Rainbow Dash's sports bag. "Do you want me to call your mom and dad for you?"

This paragraph is in there twice.

Knight N Gale

Knight N Gale #5 · Oct 20th, 2017 · · · Fallen Star ·

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You know they have Equestria Girls character tags right? It would look like this
Rainbow Dash(EQG)

dj-pon3fan

dj-pon3fan #6 · Nov 8th, 2017 · · · Fallen Star ·

Ouch. That hurts like crazy. I had a friend in high school who had a knee injury like that. It wasn't terrible but he was out for a season.

everydaygamer

everydaygamer #7 · Jan 21st, 2018 · · · Diagnosis ·

Good chapter but if you're gonna use the canon parents it's Windy Whistles and Bow Hothoof.

Twihardbookish

Twihardbookish #8 · Jan 21st, 2018 · · · Diagnosis ·

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I didn't realize that's was her name, sorry. Thanks for the input, it is now corrected. I did want her to be canon, so it was good that you corrected me. I do appreciate positive critique. I am trying to become a better writer, so anything i can do to make it better helps. I hate when people just say mean things about a person's work.

Stormgnome

Stormgnome #9 · Jan 22nd, 2018 · · · Diagnosis ·

The knee is not A bone, it's several bones interconnected called a joint.
They would still do those things, MRI and/or x-ray to figure out what the injury is though.