We all have secrets. Some secrets are meant to be hidden, and the ones meant to be hidden which are tried so hard to protect become told, otherwise the other pony might go, insane? Scootaloo has a secret. Rainbow Dash has killed many ponies. What would be her other friends reactions if they actually found out? Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash are the only ones who know the Secret behind the rainbows. But when Scootaloo can't keep the secret with Dash anymore, and she tells somepony, will Dash be able to explain herself?
Chapters (8)
1027930 well, there's little to no gore. so....why? give me reasons why it should be rated mature
Alright, I'm just going to say it now. That cover title looks like Puss-in-boots.
Ok so I haven't read it yet, but I have a feeling it will be good. Even though it will probably not be as gorey as flutter.
1028745 It wasn't supposed to be gorey, so thats why its not rated Mature. tell me what u think later
1028744 How does it look like puss-in-boots?
I literally Loled when I read the description.
especially when it said the thing about the secret of the rainbows.
But then I was Deeply disturbed when I read the story.
1030405 I don't get how you lol'ld
I dont know either I guess it was because of how unbelievable the whole description sounded.
1030812
thankies
this was a great story, ended a bit cheesy though, but still great.
the description made me laugh cause i knew what it meant because i read rainbow factory a while ago.
1042394 thank you!
and y are people saying that reading the description made them laugh? 
1042407 you're welcome.
and people are laughing at the description because to some people, like me, if they read rainbow factory they would also know the secret behind making rainbows, if not then they'd just laugh thinking its probably a little joke or something also believing that rainbow dash would never kill anypony.
1042446 I get it now
this is to anyone reading if you've read the rainbow factory creepypasta/grimdark story listen to this song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4PjIhs72l0A
you might, might not like it but it fits well while reading this story.
this is to anyone reading if you've read the rainbow factory creepypasta/grimdark story listen to this song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4PjIhs72l0A
you might, might not like it but it fits well while reading this story.
1052953 Hm....It does go with the story sort of. Thanks!
the ending was a bit too sudden :I
but other then that it was a great sequel to the rainbow factory!
it feels like the rest of the story was rushed bigtime
This is going painfully slow. Ill keep going, but jeez. Three chapters and nothing.
Happiness
Don't stop them! They can stop Rainbow and end that sadistic horrible test and tear down the Rainbow Factory!
starting to get exciting
Of course Celestia knew about it, she just didn’t bring the old fashioned rainbows made by unicorns cause she’d rather sit on her rump in the castle