Diamonds were supposed to be tough. But Diamond Tiaras were meant to be shattered. And Appleblooms tore, and Scootaloos broke, and Sweetie Belles cracked-
What she didn't understand was how they fixed themselves.
Diamond finds herself asking why in Equestria she ever decided to cry in the middle of Market Street, and Applebloom finds herself asking why she helped. But hey, they've got all the time in Equestria. Well, the school year, that is.
As Diamond and Applebloom explore their feelings, they discover a whole new world of possibilities.
Chapters (2)
Not bad, but its a little unclear where in the series this took place. Maybe you should've proffered a bit more of an explanation on that front. Also, too many new OCs. Unless they're going to add anything to the plot, perhaps you shouldn't have introduced so many at once.
That quick kiss at the end sort of came out of nowhere... I'd be interested in where you'll take the story from this point onwards. You have a follow. Good luck!
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Yeah, I really appreciate it! Thanks so much for the advice. I'm working on the next chapter right now, so it'll be clear what point in time. (I assumed that the CMCs were about seven in the series, so this is about...8 years after the episode Crusaders of the Lost Mark. The kiss was random, thought process was lost. XD) Again, thank you so so much!
Still a bit confused by what's going on, but it seems enjoyable enough. Keep on writing!
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;) Again, thanks! It's my first fic, so I'm not amazing at stories. Like, at all.
Why is this rated M?
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XD I am remotely sure it was a mistake, it was actually supposed to be rated teen. I must have been paying zero attention, thank you for telling me!