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royalty of equestria (OLD)

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the kingdoms of Equestria:
Ponistopolis, Drakarnia, Deersalem, and SeaPonis. (pony-stop-olis) (Dra-c-R-nia) (Deer-Say-lem) (see-pon-i-s)
the land in heavy tense feeling with the possibility of war looming, what is a ruler like princess twilight supposed to do? join her kingdom with another through marriage.
(cover art: cherishedgatherer.deviantart.com)

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welcome to my world... · 11th Jun 2017 · 1,972 words
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coffee is important · 23rd Jul 2017 · 1,492 words
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metroid_freak

metroid_freak #1 · Jul 11th, 2018 · 3 · · coffee is important ·

The first word of a sentence is capitalized. I recommend studying up on grammar before continuing.

ExplosionMare

ExplosionMare #2 · Jul 11th, 2018 · 1 · · coffee is important ·

The only complaint I have is that there are many capitalization errors. Remember: The first word in each sentence, places, characters, and titles all need to be capitalized. Other than that I like what you’ve done so far.