Spike starts to get doubt if all the things he does to gain raritys' affection is for not.But what happens when he finally confess, but things will start to get weird. Well, only one thing to do is find out!
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Can't wait till the next chapter
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I would just reccomend against using emojis in the actual fic itself. It takes away some of the oomph of the dialogue. But this is a solid start and premise for your first story.
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thanks i will do that but just to understand what do you mean the emojis, explain a little more pls and thank you
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Like, when you're reading, you wanna get from line to line, word to word, without interference that could break your immersion. It's like when authors throw a youtube video in the middle of a story, it kinda throws off the pace of everything.
It's not a big deal, just a suggestion.
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i get you, i just put it in there so
the reader can see what the emotion or face they make just in case I can't write it out in sentence.