In Good Hooves

Twilight Sparkle has prepared a marvelous gift for her former student, Starlight Glimmer, in celebration of her most recent triumph.

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RoyalBardofCanterlot

RoyalBardofCanterlot #1 · Dec 7th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Nooo, don't leave Twilight!

zimmerwald1915

zimmerwald1915 #2 · Dec 7th, 2017 · 1 · 8 ·

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You say that like there's going to be more, or a revision. There isn't. Again, I just had to get this off my chest so I could get back to mean-spirited forum posts.

Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever

Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever #3 · Mar 6th, 2018 · · ·

Starlight usually slept in, and it showed. Her eyes were still puffy with tiredness and squinting at the low angle of the morning sun. She looked at Twilight’s grin, at her pointing hoof, and the crystal throne at which the hoof was pointing. She rubbed her eyes. “Twilight… ” she said dubiously, “what am I looking at?”

What

Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever

Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever #4 · Mar 6th, 2018 · 1 · ·

This was a good story but I wouldn’t want, Twilight to leave.

zimmerwald1915

zimmerwald1915 #5 · Mar 6th, 2018 · 2 · ·

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Incorrect. The quoted bits are one sentence, with a pause in. The ellipsis and "saidism" accentuate the pause, but don't actually amount to a full stop.

If there was a full stop, it would have come after the ellipsis, and before the quotation mark.

Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever

Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever #6 · Mar 6th, 2018 · · ·

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That’s interesting.

zimmerwald1915

zimmerwald1915 #7 · Mar 6th, 2018 · 1 · 1 ·

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Any other ending would hardly have matched the melancholic tone.

Vigriff

Vigriff #8 · May 5th, 2018 · · 7 ·

Honestly, I can see this happening because of the writers blatant favoritism towards Starlight.

zimmerwald1915

zimmerwald1915 #9 · May 5th, 2018 · · 5 ·

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Gee.

Vigriff

Vigriff #10 · May 5th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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I don't know if that's a good 'Gee' or a bad one.

Comment posted by Dominus Alicorn deleted Sep 10th, 2018

Violet Rose in The Rain

Violet Rose in The Rain #12 · Nov 4th, 2018 · 17 · 1 ·

What Twilight did here was really out of character and the situation was entirely contrived just for the situation where she would leave everybody.

But judging from how you like to shit on her like she's a public toilet, that really doesn't surprise me.

zimmerwald1915

zimmerwald1915 #13 · Nov 4th, 2018 · 1 · 24 ·

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The situation was provided by the events of an episode, not spun out of my head. And the story points out an instance where Twilight acted in exactly this way, so it's not out of character either.

You just don't like that these things are true, and so lash out at me for pointing them out. I pity you.

ALittleUnwell