• Member Since 25th Feb, 2017
  • offline last seen Mar 30th, 2019

AstraPony


Da fuq u readin dis for?

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After hopping from family to family for years, Wilted Rose is starting to question her life. What will it take to save her.

Warning: Contains suicidal situations.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 8 )

Man, Clue Dectect is an ass. :twilightangry2:

Pretty good so far. Pacing seems a little fast though. If you'd like, I'll proofread/offer suggestions for future chapters for you through Google Docs.

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Yup! There's a reason this story is labeled dark.

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I know, I'm new and I'm trying. Some stories are more fast paced than others... but wait until you see what the ending is! It'll be pretty... good... (no spoilers!)

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(no spoilers!)

Awwww...:pinkiesad2:

Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

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A detailed suicide attempt in the first chapter (but the rest is semi happy... for now). But don't worry, no blood! :)

Oooo. Someone's in love (even though they don't know it). :pinkiehappy:

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