the princesses cast what they thought was an immortality spell. In actuality, it turned out to be an immorality spell.
Those typos are a fucking killer, aren't they?
And the part where Scootaloo started praying to Discord was awesome. I'm guessing that's where the story is going? Discord is Robespierre, or something.
...the springs of popular government in revolution are at once virtue and terror: virtue, without which terror is fatal; terror, without which virtue is powerless. Terror is nothing other than justice, prompt, severe, inflexible; it is therefore an emanation of virtue ...
Bolding was mine, translation was by some guy, I dunno.
EDIT: Also, the last two chapters made me think of this song:
Both because of all the literal eating, and the general theme of self-indulgence to the point of rotting.
This story is rated 18+ for allusions to necrophilia and graphic descriptions of rape, incest, torture, watersports, scat and pedofoalila. Anyone uncomfortable with these topics should not read it! Viewer discretion is strongly advised.
1609711 I was originally just trying to comment on the fact that they'd misread the spell. Some monk forgot to copy the "T," happens all the time. Or one of the sisters wasn't as well educated as she should have been. "Immorality is the thing where you live forever, right?" "What? Wait! No, that wasn't ... FUCK!" "Well, if you insist."
I guess you're not commenting on that far in the story's future. Ah well. Normally, I dislike when gorefics end with the villain dying, because it feels like a cheat (like how black & white gangster movies were always packaged as cautionary tales that are not at all glorifying criminals and murderers). However, the idea of Discord spewing revolutionary rhetoric while he slices and dices his way through the aristocracy would almost make it worth it.
Aaah.... Aldous Huxley... Such a fantastic author, I recall the first book of his I read in form five, "A Brave New World" I believe it was.. Wrote an essay on it. "Soma: A gramme a day keeps your worries away!" or something to that effect... Sadly my class mates did not find the book as fascinating as I did...
Now then... I've said it before but... Beyond divine intervention I do not see this ending well for anyone other than the libertines... And considering the signifcant lack of deities... Yeah.
The words died in her mouth when Scootaloo realized that the princesses she had spent her whole life praying to were the same ones who forced her to eat shit.
This is a greater metaphor for life then I have ever seen before.
942410, I love your stories BronyStories, especially the Lyra and Bon Bon's Odd Jobs,wish I want you to continue. Even though this story sickened and horrified me, I have ask, did you intend to ponify pretty much every movie the Cinema Snob has reviewed and make us make hate Blueblood more? Cause i applaud you on both accounts, you captured the movies (or what I known from his reviews) perfectly, and I hate canon Blueblood
Once again, mixed emotions on this one. I mean, I KNEW thestory would have parts like this in it. How could it not, you know? At the same time, scenes with the group of young fillies and colts... it doesnt sit well with me. Interesting, the Sweetie and Apple chapters didn't bother me as much as this one did. I dunno.
At the moment, I'm just trying to remind myself that this is a story. Although, I will admit, Bronystories, your stories are helping me find my limits and where I draw the line pretty well.
"Yes. Moar. Disgust. Something Delightfully sick that makes me grin like a crazy person. Worry. Ect."
Just a few amongst the wide list of things that my brain goes through when I read your stories.
Btw... I am trully curious where this Prayer to Discord will end up at.
Has brutalassmaster been suspended yet? BTW, Unicorns are not the master race. Unicorns are just prissy little bitches who are afraid to do any manual labor, so they wave their horns, so as to avoid the strain. And if unicorns ever made a moove to become the 'master race', The alicorn sisters would release the most horrid creatures of Tartarus upon the world, wipe out everypony, and start anew without said unicorn bitches. All this being said, I actually love unicorns and the idea of them thinking of themselves as the 'Master Race' It makes for enjoyable stories such as 'Letters From A Disgruntled Friendship Student'. But it won't ever happen. I, being the Beginning and the End, the First Evil and the Purity of all things in existence, the First and the Last, the Ultimate Evil of all of Equestria and the Universe, would like to say to any would-be unicorn activists that I would graciously consent to all those lower that I- Which would be, um, all of you- to wipe out the nasty fucks like a parasprite infestation. I am the Only! I am the Black Hole of Life and Death, Existence and Nothingness, Light and Dark! I will destroy all of you! Fuck all life, I will purge the universe of every last fucking one of you! I created Discord, Chrysalis, King Sombra, and Nightmare Moon! I am the First Evil and the Only Good! I spawned from the depths of Tartarus all things evil, and sent from Elysium all things of Purity! I could take that back in an instant, so don't test me you puny unicorn! And Celestia can suck my noncorporial dick! She is no god! She is merely a figurehead in the ultimate goal of the Final End! First Evil is out! Peace! (Or Chaos, whatever side you support.)942260>>937045>>924885
Well I racked up the charges and the total is Blueblood: 8 rapes. 7 charges with a minor and under the age of consent. Public indecency. 8 corruption of minors. About 6 homicides. Another other charges tell me
Which brings me to the sentencing...
Death penalty 80 times in All European countries ( western and Russian) and in the United States along with a total of 4574 years of imprisonment without parole along with another124 life sentences.
Damn it, now you have actual, meaningful story going on. In this dank, terrible shit hole of a fic. I mean that in the most positive of ways.... since there aren't many positive ways that could be taken, it is safe to assume that it is exactly as you think I mean it.
I hate to continue reading. I want to imagine Scootaloo finding a way to kill all of them and escape. Or hell, just kill all of them. Even if she'd die my feelings would be satisfied if she killed all the libertines. It wouldn't be justice... but honestly.... what can you do to people who willingly eat shit that they would register as torture?
Yup. I'm done for now. Also, this is kinda what I hope is what happens. (NSFW: http://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/76338/ ) Seriously... she even prayed... I half expected this to happen.
Oh man. A new chapter, a new breed of immorality. I would be disappointed if you hadn't hit all the nasty topics of perversion and immorality by the end of it.
This chapter didn't make me quite as sick or uncomfortable as the previous ones had, but it did make me interested in what's going to happen next. After the shock of the grotesque mental images wears off, there's quite the story about human (or pony) nature and what we're really capable of here.
New 120 Days of Blueblood is up! Sister Spectrum will make her appearance in the next chapter.
Hmm... I will the violence to start.
Oh, this...Nothing is better than this!
Keep up writings! You're my most favorited writer of all the time!
I have a weird boner
Those typos are a fucking killer, aren't they?
And the part where Scootaloo started praying to Discord was awesome. I'm guessing that's where the story is going? Discord is Robespierre, or something.
Bolding was mine, translation was by some guy, I dunno.
EDIT: Also, the last two chapters made me think of this song:
Both because of all the literal eating, and the general theme of self-indulgence to the point of rotting.
1609669
I'll fix that typo.
EDIT: Fixed!
I was getting an Emperor's New Groove vibe while writing the Princesses back story.
"This isn't poison! This is essence of llama!"
On that note, I recently discovered a deleted song from the Emperor's New Groove.
How has this not been made into a million pony music videos featuring Luna yet? It's about seeking revenge against the sun.
Only allusions?
That actually made me laugh out loud.
1609711
I was originally just trying to comment on the fact that they'd misread the spell. Some monk forgot to copy the "T," happens all the time.
Or one of the sisters wasn't as well educated as she should have been.
"Immorality is the thing where you live forever, right?"
"What? Wait! No, that wasn't ... FUCK!"
"Well, if you insist."
I guess you're not commenting on that far in the story's future. Ah well. Normally, I dislike when gorefics end with the villain dying, because it feels like a cheat (like how black & white gangster movies were always packaged as cautionary tales that are not at all glorifying criminals and murderers).
However, the idea of Discord spewing revolutionary rhetoric while he slices and dices his way through the aristocracy would almost make it worth it.
1609780
I'm not going to say what role, if any, Discord will play in the events. I'm also not telling what will happen to Blueblood and his cronies.
Thanks for the feedback, but you'll just have to wait until the next several chapters.
1609485
cmon, violent and gory revolution, cmon...
either that or this is gonna end up all 1984ing
Man, new chapter... I KEEP ON LAUGHING, I AM A TERRRRIBLE PERSON
Aaah....
Aldous Huxley...
Such a fantastic author, I recall the first book of his I read in form five, "A Brave New World" I believe it was..
Wrote an essay on it.
"Soma: A gramme a day keeps your worries away!" or something to that effect...
Sadly my class mates did not find the book as fascinating as I did...
Now then...
I've said it before but...
Beyond divine intervention I do not see this ending well for anyone other than the libertines...
And considering the signifcant lack of deities...
Yeah.
1984 anyone?
You really missed the perfect opportunity to finally use a Caslick operation in a fic. Legitimately.
http://medical-dictionary.thefreedictionary.com/Caslick+operation
1609485 Each time I read a chapter... I die a little inside.
Which is why you have the potential and skills of becoming an accomplished author/writer one day.
But still... I die a little inside.
Can't wait for more chapters.
Not bad, but needs more foal fucking.....*licks lips*....oh yes....foals......foals.......so sweet.....
1609485
This is a greater metaphor for life then I have ever seen before.
Sister Spectrum= ?
1651239
You've got it.
Sister Spectrum's chapter will be posted before the end of November!
942410, I love your stories BronyStories, especially the Lyra and Bon Bon's Odd Jobs,wish I want you to continue. Even though this story sickened and horrified me, I have ask, did you intend to ponify pretty much every movie the Cinema Snob has reviewed and make us make hate Blueblood more? Cause i applaud you on both accounts, you captured the movies (or what I known from his reviews) perfectly, and I hate canon Blueblood
Needs more filly rape :|
1687685
Once again, mixed emotions on this one. I mean, I KNEW thestory would have parts like this in it. How could it not, you know? At the same time, scenes with the group of young fillies and colts... it doesnt sit well with me. Interesting, the Sweetie and Apple chapters didn't bother me as much as this one did. I dunno.
At the moment, I'm just trying to remind myself that this is a story. Although, I will admit, Bronystories, your stories are helping me find my limits and where I draw the line pretty well.
"Yes. Moar. Disgust. Something Delightfully sick that makes me grin like a crazy person. Worry. Ect."
Just a few amongst the wide list of things that my brain goes through when I read your stories.
Btw... I am trully curious where this Prayer to Discord will end up at.
Has brutalassmaster been suspended yet? BTW, Unicorns are not the master race. Unicorns are just prissy little bitches who are afraid to do any manual labor, so they wave their horns, so as to avoid the strain. And if unicorns ever made a moove to become the 'master race', The alicorn sisters would release the most horrid creatures of Tartarus upon the world, wipe out everypony, and start anew without said unicorn bitches. All this being said, I actually love unicorns and the idea of them thinking of themselves as the 'Master Race' It makes for enjoyable stories such as 'Letters From A Disgruntled Friendship Student'. But it won't ever happen. I, being the Beginning and the End, the First Evil and the Purity of all things in existence, the First and the Last, the Ultimate Evil of all of Equestria and the Universe, would like to say to any would-be unicorn activists that I would graciously consent to all those lower that I- Which would be, um, all of you- to wipe out the nasty fucks like a parasprite infestation. I am the Only! I am the Black Hole of Life and Death, Existence and Nothingness, Light and Dark! I will destroy all of you! Fuck all life, I will purge the universe of every last fucking one of you! I created Discord, Chrysalis, King Sombra, and Nightmare Moon! I am the First Evil and the Only Good! I spawned from the depths of Tartarus all things evil, and sent from Elysium all things of Purity! I could take that back in an instant, so don't test me you puny unicorn! And Celestia can suck my noncorporial dick! She is no god! She is merely a figurehead in the ultimate goal of the Final End! First Evil is out! Peace! (Or Chaos, whatever side you support.)942260>>937045>>924885
I will Never be able to watch Princess Molestia videos ever again after reading this story....
Bravo, you magnificent bastard, bravo.
Well I racked up the charges and the total is
Blueblood: 8 rapes. 7 charges with a minor and under the age of consent. Public indecency. 8 corruption of minors. About 6 homicides. Another other charges tell me
Which brings me to the sentencing...
Death penalty 80 times in All European countries ( western and Russian) and in the United States along with a total of 4574 years of imprisonment without parole along with another124 life sentences.
And this is just Blueblood
Damn it, now you have actual, meaningful story going on. In this dank, terrible shit hole of a fic. I mean that in the most positive of ways.... since there aren't many positive ways that could be taken, it is safe to assume that it is exactly as you think I mean it.
I hate to continue reading. I want to imagine Scootaloo finding a way to kill all of them and escape. Or hell, just kill all of them. Even if she'd die my feelings would be satisfied if she killed all the libertines. It wouldn't be justice... but honestly.... what can you do to people who willingly eat shit that they would register as torture?
Yup. I'm done for now.
Also, this is kinda what I hope is what happens.
(NSFW: http://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/76338/ )
Seriously... she even prayed... I half expected this to happen.
1735225
Don't forget the things he's stolen. Also kidnapping. Conspiracy for any deeds committed by the others....
But, it is important what can be proven.
1710485 Lets just find that perty little soul of yours.
1651241 Make sure when you do this one it has wing-ripping action.
Oh man. A new chapter, a new breed of immorality. I would be disappointed if you hadn't hit all the nasty topics of perversion and immorality by the end of it.
This chapter didn't make me quite as sick or uncomfortable as the previous ones had, but it did make me interested in what's going to happen next. After the shock of the grotesque mental images wears off, there's quite the story about human (or pony) nature and what we're really capable of here.
"Celestia ad Luna
Yep.
Bronystories what were you binging on to write this?!
Better question, What do I want to read it?!