The orgy scene lost focus as it approaches the end. At first it was the guards setting on the crowd like wolves to sheep. Sadistic, shameless and opportunistic bitches like Mrs. Cake being a rarity. But then there's a description of mares masturbating while waiting. The screams of the innocent suddenly disappear. Is the hypnotic melody suppose to be a Deus Ex Machina? Is this a rape orgy or a non-rapey orgy?
Why, Bronystories? Why must you write an intriguing, yet, heart-piercing stories? Oh God... I need some pony therapies before moving onto the next chapter.
I'm not quite sure why, but the first couple of paragraphs of this chapter made me think of Emily Dickinson's poem 'Because I could not stop for death'. In retrospect, it seems appropriate somehow.
Fluttershy is about to have a very bad time, I dare say.
5435212 I'm pretty sure Sister Spectrum's friend was Cheerilee. She was described as dark pink with a pink mane and a cutie mark of three smiling flowers
ALRIGHT CHUMPS LETS READ THIS!
The orgy scene lost focus as it approaches the end. At first it was the guards setting on the crowd like wolves to sheep. Sadistic, shameless and opportunistic bitches like Mrs. Cake being a rarity. But then there's a description of mares masturbating while waiting. The screams of the innocent suddenly disappear. Is the hypnotic melody suppose to be a Deus Ex Machina? Is this a rape orgy or a non-rapey orgy?
Why, Bronystories? Why must you write an intriguing, yet, heart-piercing stories? Oh God... I need some pony therapies before moving onto the next chapter.
I read the chapter whilst listening to Owl City.
I lel'd
I'm not quite sure why, but the first couple of paragraphs of this chapter made me think of Emily Dickinson's poem 'Because I could not stop for death'.
In retrospect, it seems appropriate somehow.
Fluttershy is about to have a very bad time, I dare say.
twow is gonna have so much fun.
The end of this was almost heartwarming.
Oh god, what are you planning?
Oh God .. I saw something like this coming... am I going to die? This will not end well...
So... what happened to the kids?
Fluttershy's heart isnt gonna be broken. It's gonna be burned.
The Twist part made me laugh so fucking hard.
Jane Austen reference?
And that, ladies and gentlemen, is what basing a relationship on personality is all about.
Hasn't there already been a "Fluttershy" analogue in this story? Sister Spectrum's friend ...?
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I'm pretty sure Sister Spectrum's friend was Cheerilee. She was described as dark pink with a pink mane and a cutie mark of three smiling flowers
I died from laughter.
Ah, this hurts my heart. RIP Fluttershy's innocence... probably her too.
This will be great.