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[One-shot] [Humanized/not anthropormophic]
You have become the husband of a powerful ruler -Princess Luna- against her wishes, you love and would do anything for her and your only wish is for her to love you back.
It's been over a month and a half and she's still doing the same thing; ignoring and shutting you out. Hopefully some tea and cheesecake turn the tide.
Warning: contains usage of alcohol and the word hell is used like once in the whole story.

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Comments ( 8 )

Good story. I just feel if you had extended it, give some more character development and some passage of time, it would be an amazing story. All said, a great one-shot, and a great 1st story.

You had me at Cheesecake l, I don't care if she's an alien pony princess from another world without internet, she can make Cheesecake!!! Sorry boys but I call dibs on Princess Luna.

Also awesome story! I look forward to a sequel that may never come.

Can I get a full fledged multi chapter story of this. I really want to see this concept go somewhere.

Crap. I was hoping there would be more sadness so luna would wallow in it for at least a month or so till she realized how she fucked up which would lead to a more realistic happy end instead of that we got a shorter kinda c-movie version.

I REALLY want to find another story almost exactly like this or pretty similar. Even if it's with other characters.

Comment posted by Excalibur deleted Jan 29th, 2021

Lovely oneshot, my only problem with it is that is too short

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