The Cheesecake Debacle

TThe Cheesecake Chronicles
MLP: FiM
Romance
Drama
Slice of Life
A Classical Dido Reinterpretation of The Cheesecake Debacle, Join yourself and other lovely Anons as you witness first hand the turmoil we must go through to win the love of our lives. And you cant forget about the Cheesecake~
Sex
Second Person
Human
Celestia
Luna
Anon
Self Insert
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[One-shot] [Humanized/not anthropormophic]
You have become the husband of a powerful ruler -Princess Luna- against her wishes, you love and would do anything for her and your only wish is for her to love you back.
It's been over a month and a half and she's still doing the same thing; ignoring and shutting you out. Hopefully some tea and cheesecake turn the tide.
Warning: contains usage of alcohol and the word hell is used like once in the whole story.

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593322

593322 #1 · Mar 18th, 2017 · 6 · ·

Good story. I just feel if you had extended it, give some more character development and some passage of time, it would be an amazing story. All said, a great one-shot, and a great 1st story.

Goofball With Internet

Goofball With Internet #2 · Mar 21st, 2017 · 2 · ·

You had me at Cheesecake l, I don't care if she's an alien pony princess from another world without internet, she can make Cheesecake!!! Sorry boys but I call dibs on Princess Luna.

Also awesome story! I look forward to a sequel that may never come.

Raggedviking

Raggedviking #3 · Mar 29th, 2017 · 8 · ·

Can I get a full fledged multi chapter story of this. I really want to see this concept go somewhere.

JadeFox

JadeFox #4 · Jan 30th, 2018 · 6 · ·

Crap. I was hoping there would be more sadness so luna would wallow in it for at least a month or so till she realized how she fucked up which would lead to a more realistic happy end instead of that we got a shorter kinda c-movie version.

WUBZ-_-Vinyl