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Castok the Shadow


Humans... Humans everywhere

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"You see me as a friend?"

"Maybe more?"

Did you ever had that one person who stood by your side when you were young? That stood with you and taught you and loved you every time you meet that person?

No? Well you're a very lucky person.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 33 )

Hmm, I like.

Pretty good, I like it.:moustache:

Nice story. It was really good. Have a sequel in mind?

6032303 Sort of. I'm not so sure if to continue or not

6032443 u should. It's pretty good, and the reactions would be great :)

6032570 Kay...Just trying to support :P

Must there be so much misanthropy in the beginning?

Comment posted by Castok the Shadow deleted May 29th, 2015

6032603 And I thanks you.:pinkiesmile:

But I'm working on my other story that many people wanted a sequel so I may not make a sequel for this soon.

6033395 Take your time :)

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I disliked it because the use of that emoticon made me feel that you are taking my initial comment as a joke. Didn't appreciate it much. At least I didn't go on some hate rant. Granted I wouldn't have anyway, but still.

6034213 Look the main OC does not hate his race, he just hates how his people are all divided and hated each other small reason. I'm not saying that he hates all humans. Just the ones that made all of the bad things that made groups, cultures or nations not get along with each other and besides, he wanted all of us to be as one. No border lines, just one land, water and sky.

There's no misanthropy on a complete human stranger. He just didn't like how things are running and if we do find life, he just saying that those how made our lives bad will go on the others lives outside us.

That's all.

PS No joke was made towards you, I didn't know that you would respond so I just went with 'Dunno'

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Actually, no. He`s just an immature asshole that can`t be bothered figuring out what`s what - when something doesn`t match the cosy little world he thought up for himself, he throws a tantrum. In that sense, he`s remarkably human. And remarkably disgusting.

6037262 Isn't it great we're humans

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You can either embrace it or consider it beneath yourself. All too many try to find justification in first, and all too often, they are surprised when they garner no sympathy from the second.

It needs a sequel, at least end it with a proper answer, not a question. It was a good read, though. Quite interesting and I want to see what would happen if he and Cadence finally have a reunion, if it would be called a reunion that is.

(thinking face (:trixieshiftleft:))
It definitely needs a sequel because, even if i read this 5 times (*sigh* which i did:fluttershysad:) i'm still lost.

still points for taste to my liking and a thumbs up or like as they call it on this site.

Sad but not sad enough i like it but the cover ewww change it please

Yeah shove it back up your ass you pathetic, forgiveness son of a bitch. Screw that shit.

more chapters please?

I... just no. I can't give this a like, I can't even give this story a favorite. The spelling, the grammar, everything was just... I had written up quite a bit more pointing out quite a few things that I didn't like. The main bit was leaving it at such a conclusion where there was no conclusion but I see you wrote a sequel. But the fact of the matter is, I just can't read it, to me it's.. it's just so badly done. You need to get someone to edit this for you, you need to have it cleaned up majorly so it doesn't look so badly written.

And you also need to change the cover pic, because not only is it really creepy looking, It looks like his hands were chopped off and swapped. I'm sorry but, hopefully you will improve in time and you'll continue writing stories to your hearts content, but for me... *Shakes his head* I won't be reading anymore until then. Have a good morning/afternoon/evening.

. There was good in my people past. She told me that fighting for home and family, for the people you love and care. That is worth fighting for and maybe... Worth dying for. She gave me pride. Pride of being my kind, being human... Being me.

This stopped me from closing the tab very unique in a human is misanthrope HiE

A sequel would be awesome! I love this sorry, even though it may have bad grammar.

I watched them with disbelief and a broken heart. She...

Please do a sequel

Well then...interesting way to narrate the story also not sure how to take this story. However it was good.

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