• Published 12th Mar 2017
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Brink of Extinction - Guilty2501



There are only five alicorns alive in the entire world that Equestria is in, this a specie on the verge of Extinction, action needs to be taken but will the cure be worse than the problem.

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Technically alicorns aren't a species, in fact they are a subspecies of ponies and thus can theoretically be birthed by any normal pony.

um I don't think shining is going to tolerate this.

for a second i hoped luna wouldnt get out of character, not to mention this idea looks over pushed.

Btw what happened to spickey? :raritydespair:

good story, but where is the twilight tag?

story is phenomenal the ideology however is absolutely horrible, i think in this case it was more likely that cadance was horny and shining didn't want to have sex...

8020092 I appreciate the interest but could I ask what do you mean that the Ideology is awful?

8021486 that rape is ok when your species is going extinct, if you want to repopulate your species then at least get willing mates!!!
but that's the story isn't it...

i want to see where twilight gets mad and goes on a rampage afterwords. Maybe call Celestia or at least cadence out on it... because if the public got ahold of this... Celestia would be sent packing... at least by all of the will have been rape victims.

8021842 That comes later...if this story survives and doesn't go extinct itself because this yet another story I am kicking myself over. I let another bad idea become a story.

8021984 ok that makes sense I've actually been hoping that was where this would go YAY I cant wait!!!!
I'll make sure to put this on my recommended list (in progress of being made)
edit I just added it to everything

8021984
I don't thick it is a bad idea, but it may been rush and the story have some moment of shit happens one moment and then only after some second they forget it.

The sheer rage of the act will cause Shining Armor to mutate into the alicorn of vengeance and proceed to obliterate the sisters and their lackeys. Just a silly story idea. Not to mention what Fluttershy will tell Discord to do. Kindness has limits.

Please continue the story!

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It's extremely unlikely but I'd be lying if I said I won't consider it.

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