A new stallion has taken up residence in Ponyville. Who is he, and why is he here? Rainbow Dash wants to find out.
One-shot.
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Well, it was an okay story by title I thought it was going be a creepy story, but I was pleasantly surprised. I feel like the romance was rushed maybe if there many chapters of getting know him, but he being secretive about or maybe he don't want to talk the past. It needs more, in my opinion.
There are some spelling mishaps here and there over all not bad for your first try.
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Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it!
How did this make it into the TF/TG group's clopfic folder if it's rated Teen?
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I removed it immediately after. It shouldn't be there anymore. 
'Twas an accident.
Short, but somehow not very rushed for how much it conveys. I enjoyed it.
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Thanks for reading! And I'm so happy you liked it!
This is pretty darn good for your first try. Thanks for putting this up.
For your first story, this went very well. You really have a strong sense of atmosphere, and it's interesting to read this after reading your other stories and how your writing has grown.