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Followed by the Pony-Changeling treaty, Changelings and Ponies alike are now integrated with each other's culture and lives, even if the Changelings are constantly blasted by racism by Ponies and Zebras alike. Follow a Changeling colt Veere through his life of racism and hatred by Ponies, and alienation as he is the only Changeling present in Ponyville as of integration periods.

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Wow. :twilightangry2::ajbemused::flutterrage:

Man, these bullies ought to be expelled, and their parents told (and hopefully punish them), and legislation banning bullying passed by Celestia and Luna.

Really promising so far!

Im tracking, keep this up and i'll Throw a fav in there, great story so far

He found himself getting the sniffles, and involuntarily swiping his arm across his nostrils to wipe it away. Like the blood from a fresh snout bleed..

not sure if it sounds so stupid the way I image it in german, but it is just funny if they talk like that.

It is even harder for Veere to learn if he has bullies against him, I know that it can pretty much take the focus of everything.

Ponies are too mushy-mushy, Veere thought, a scowl forming, too soft.

in a way I like to think it's true, that makes other characters sometimes more interessting, because there has to be some kind of conflict.

He hated school, and he would have to come back tomorrow for another round of punishment. He never did notice the saddened glances of three fillies watching as he ventured out with a blank face and nothing he once had in his possession.

I hate ponies. He sniffed, his lips trembling as he walked away giving a silent sob to no audience but himself.

I like it, but at the same time I hope he keeps some of his mean warrior personality and they learn to accept him, instead of the CMC "fixing" his personality.
It is like when a human would get along with a rather blunt minotaur and the ponies, would try to tell the minotaur how wrong he is to act like that.
I guess now you maybe know what I mean with that.

The story itself looks really nice even if I'm not in the mood tonight for much.

Veere stared at the stuffed bear leaning on the wall in front of him. "Rock, do you have a suggestion?" His voice as deep like a certain Riddick's, staring at the bear.

wow this is an awwwwww how sad/cute moment.

Okay this chapter was nice and I guess better than nice, but tonight I hoped for more, I guess I'm just not in the mood.

I think I will like this more than I thought, I even try to not...well be to hard on the story if it isn'T exactly showing stuff I prefer, as long as it is really not bad in my eyes, I promise to give the story a fair cance.

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