"A simple mare living simple dreams, a rumor that's not quite as it seems"~WoodenToaster
Kerpy is just a simple mare who lives simple dreams, and there is a rumor that's not quite as it seems.
~Authors Note~
I know that I put a cliff hanger at the end, but you guys have to wait for the other half to come out. So sorry!
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i saw that carrot top viedo
and im still wondering what the hell the rumor was
okay okay wait, she was a filly for 100 years after running from home. Then she was a full grown mare in ten years? That makes no sense. The story could use some vast improvement. The sentence structure is strange and the pace is off. The way characters interact just doesn't feel right, and the fact the the whole kingdom showed up to hear her sing was a bit much. Maybe a small crowd would have worked.
Also, what the hell kind of whip was their mother using to be able to take off a hoof in one swing?
How is luna not on the moon when the mane six are fully grown adults?
How is Zecora alive 1000 years later?
This story makes no sense. Usually I say a story has potential but this one is just bad. I'm sorry, i usually dont like to outright say that but its just really bad. Get a pre-reader or something.
Amazing Kerpy!
858690 I dont accutually care that anyone says anything about it, its just that somebody reads it... :3 so i dont exactly care about what you say! ^_^
858739 why thank you! ^_^
859745 now see, that is the right attitude to have. I applaud you.
*mindbuck* O_O