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Just a guy trying to do stuff that seems like a good idea, then decides isn't, and ends up deleting it. If you've seen one of my stories then wow you've got quick reflexes I delete those quite a bit.
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Besides some spelling errors, a nice one shot story idea. The setup and flow were decent and it was a nice change of fanfic. Good job. Derpy Approves
There won't be a next time! Buahaha.
The writing is solid, but I think it would have been easier for me to read if it were written in the present tense. The story is supposed to be from the reader's perspective, and it's a little disorienting to read my current thoughts in the past tense.
The description you used for the story overall was great. It intrigued me enough to click and read.
The tense jump works here, I think: moving from the past into the present that way suggests that you're right in the middle of the situation, and you've just barely had time to evaluate what's happened so far. Which, as it happens, is exactly the case.
Besides, I've watched her (for certain values of "her") walk away before, and this is exactly what it's like.
In this fic, we look behind the term, "Applejack is best pony" and summarize what it means.
And... that's about it, apparently.
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Actually, Applejack isn't my favorite pony.
She just sort of popped into my mind while writing this.
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Interesting little one shot 2nd person story. It reminds me of the 2nd Person Applejack fic I published a week ago. Though the "you" character in mine, actually gets to fess up his feelings to AJ. Though I have to laugh, like you Applejack isn't my favorite pony either. My story idea came while I was day dreaming at work.
Have a thumbs up for the story and because of the strange coincidence!
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Coincidence indeed!
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So many clopfics... Followed.