• Published 15th Feb 2017
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On Common Ground - anonpencil



After confessing her feelings for her friend-with-benefits, Berry Punch finds that their relationship has changed. Things are still steamy and intimate, but was this change really for the better?

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Comments ( 24 )

Although this is a serious story, the usual puns are still very welcome. :heart:

THIS STORY IS UNBERRYBLE also marked as incomplete, so update when?

7951254 IT IS???? FUCK! Going to go change that!!!

Haven't read it yet, liked and faved anyway, I've got no doubts at all. Love (nearly) all yo' shit pencil.

7951411
Hahaha, well, if you read all my shit, be aware that this isn't really a comedy. Some comic stuff, yes, but not like most of the other stuff.
And thank you.

this series is so heartwarming, i love it

The worst thing that can possibly happen is death. Perfect.

Really optimistic here.

Life is hard, but remember that you're not traveling it alone.

It is hard to believe that.

Keep up the great work, Pencil. :twilightsmile:

7952071
Well, even here, even in a limited capacity, you're talking to others, commenting on stories, asking questions, and getting responses. It may be very thin comfort, but there are others around you who know you exist. And that, though minuscule when life has got you down, it still a very small something to be aware of.

Don't take this as a slight against your comedy fics (they're the first reason I followed you), but I feel like your story quality really shines through with the more bittersweet and emotional subject matter. An excellent series, Pencil. Thank you.

7952615
I wholeheartedly agree.

Oh no another one..... I am gonna read this later tonight so I can cry go to bed and wake up better z.z

7953240
This one has more happy than sads, in my humble opinion.

7953438

Thank you for the catches, they should be fixed now.

Well, I've read it now... What a ride.

One hell of a series, I really can't help but have a smile on my face the entire time I spent reading all three parts - whether it's grinning from the humour, admiring how well put together those heartfelt moments are, or a more inward smile at how well you manage to punch me square in the feels. Little bit dirty with the whole somewhat joking about a worse-case scenario then having it seemingly coalesce, but I like bouts of cleverness like that.

A work of art, other synonyms for a job well done, cheerio.

This is brilliant.

When You Least Expect It was probably my favourite story I'd read here when it was released. The Waiting Room was even better, now I don't can even know what to say.

Fucking glorious stuff right here, Pencil.

...It would probably mean more if it wasn't from such a fucking retard... but I do genuinely mean it.

I love your shit, so much. not literally dear god no

7954212
Hey, glad you clarified. The people who read my work can be into some pretty weird stuff.

7953406 You monster you made my penis cry instead

It was well worth the read, and ending it on a such a happy note was definitely a great choice.

Berry was an amazing character here, though it made Anon feel a bit dull in comparison.

One thing I noticed in the series was that Berry didn't exactly feel like a recovering alcoholic, at least not if she had been drinking so much that it eventually caused alcoholic cirrhosis. And dangling even a 'fake' bottle of wine before an addict is a bit of a dangerous move.

I love these. :heart:

Just fucking shank me right in the feels famalam

I was gonna say of could it the clop and this would still be great, but to be honest, it enhances it. Just
Adds to the passion and care between these two. Awesome!!

I'm surprised that there have been no fresh comments here for so long. This is an amazing story in which there is everything to sink deep into the soul. Deep sense of life, an amazing atmosphere of romantic mood and a bright ending... heroes had fast to hide the fruits of their stormy love. Reminds me of my own adventures in the forest in youth- thanks :twilightsheepish:

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