• Member Since 4th Feb, 2016
  • offline last seen April 25th

JediWyrm


Just a person writing about ponies, like lots of people on here.

Sequels1

Comments ( 10 )

This is a great little one shot well Done.

Nice. I kinda wish the blowjob was more detailed. But nice.

Not sure which place I support to laugh...:unsuresweetie:

But this one actually have potential to be a good clopfic...Royal Guard naughty story with either maid or princess is quit rare. :twilightblush:

This story It's good and funny, i hope you can make more like it.

Not an ackward silence or anything, but the silence of those waiting punishment.

ackward -> awkward

7805832 Thanks for catching that.

Couple typos:

A commontion nearby caught their attention

*commotion

They help a loud yelp

*heard

Funny littel slice of life in the castle i say... Well done :trollestia:

Wow, this prose is terrible.

10239339
In what way?
I would appreciate some constructive criticism as I'm still working on my writing skills.

Login or register to comment