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It wouldn't be right to impose on their families. That is Sunset's reasoning not to spend the holidays with her friends. This of course means she is left alone in her apartment for them, and the holidays aren't a great time to be alone.
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7783989 GAH!... I forgot to hit the little box thingy. This is just a one-shot.
7785097 Thanks.
I was originally waiting for more before I started reading this. I have no idea how a story like this can be written well in a little over 1,000 words (unless it's nothing but diary entries). Seeing that this is it, I might as well read this to see how this story goes.
7785284 Well, I hope you let people know what you think of it once you're finished.
7785284 It's a cute little story. I'll give it a like.
This is a cute story. I don't really know what else to say but I enjoyed the atmosphere of it. Good job. You've earned an upvote. I really should check out more of your stuff.
I know it's been a couple months since publication, but you still might want to address the few typos.
7965416 Considering I tend to write more English English while my browser is set to american English, I usually ignore the squiggly red line half the time. Especially since the ponified words have them.
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Aww fudge, this seemed like a great start to a holiday special, not the end!
But it was nice all the same.
Also, "pair of skate" should be pluralized to "pair of skates"
It was sad to me. I understand that Sunset wants to be alone for Christmas. Since she is always alone in the human world, it's like for Christmas is the only time of the year that's means she's in her house. I do feel bad for her because she got no family in both worlds the only pony who saw as a mother is Celestia.
This a good story
Rarity came at the perfect time.
Aw, that was a great story. I'm happy that Rarity came to cheer up Sunset.
9/10
Happy 7th Anniversary!