On the eve of Applejack's one hundred and eighty-second birthday, an old friend drops by uninvited to pick her brain about what happens when a pony dies.
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For a story about nothing, there's quite a lot here.
Cool idea for a story.
You have "phased" in one place where you mean "fazed", and "leave" and "left" are capitalized inconsistently.
7973980 Great catch. Thanks for pointing that out.
Full review here, but in brief: quietly restrained and all the better for it. Nice world-building, too. Have a fave.
I really liked this. It was sweet. Though, some of the paragraph spacing at the end was garbled.
hmmm
on the one hand that you left it a mystery to the very end makes the story more powerfull but....
like twilight not knowing somthing makes me...twitchy
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The more you explore the world of science, the more you realize how vanishingly little you really know. There comes a point where you actually become excited by the things you don't know. I think even by the time of this story, Twilight had come to a point where in principle she was more excited about the things she didn't know than those she did, but I imagine even that excitement is abated by the sobering consideration of one's own mortality.
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given enough time though science can banish all mysteries thru carefull and persistent observation and analyasis....trouble is most of us dont have long enough to wait around for it...