Valor's deeds are always outshone by Shining Armor's. One day, he happens upon a spring.
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your going to need that black lotus picture
This one as well.
Longer it must be made.
For this idea is one of great strengh.
Oh my motherbucking gawd!!!
I don't mean it in a bad way, this is amazing, but you are pumping these things out at a pace of like two an hour!!! And they are still great! I have done hour stories, where I think up a story, write and proofread it within an hour, but this is just unnatural. And they manage to be released within that timespan, too! n, you are frustratingly amazing, and I am glad to know you on the site.
838758 im going to kill dubby one day *twitch*
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You have absolutely no idea how hard it was to find this. No idea. But I found it for you, buddy.
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I was going to do 5, but my power cut.
Once upon a time, there was a fair maiden that resided in the lowest tomb of the lowest sepulcher. She had long since passed, and the memory of her was beginning to fade as the empty years wearily drew on. However, all word of her illustrious life was not yet forgotten. A handsome colt by the name of Shining Armor had heard of said Princess, and the lore of her stunning beauty was well read by his eyes. He had been down on his luck of late, surprising for someone of his status and intellect, and he decided that he just might try something drastic...
He was told that his kiss could wake the dead...
It was time to put that theory to the test...
*anyway, that's the idea I got from this. I liked the story
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Hmm. Well, it's a good idea, but it could have been stronger. I've been reading a couple of your oneshots, and I see that you like poignant endings - you're good at them - but this one, i feel, could do with some fleshing out. This relies a lot on understatement to carry its ideas through, and it works, but could have been stronger with deeper insight into the nature of the deeds that shaped Valor into who he is.
Interesting style and ideas my friend.
With an editor, this could be fantastic.