Pinkie Pie is a detective, one of a kind. A genius, if you will.
Join her as she solves the most intricate mysteries that you never knew.
Her assistant, Twilight Sparkle, will, on occasion, provide some helpful commentary.
I know the first chapter is short, but it's a side project. I will update it on a more frequent basis if it has enough popularity though.
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I wonder if Pinkie will have to resolve the mystery next year.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png ill read it later
Heh, I wonder what would happen if Pinkie met Sherlock.
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Probably
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k
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Who knows?
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He'd deduce her.
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Heh
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That or go back to cocaine
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More than just a three patch problem now ain't it
eh -_- not my kind of story. and kind of slow. but I'm hoping it speeds up! I'll track and see!
671047 Hey! I was going to write a series of fanfics based off that TV series . . .
oh well, I hope you don't think I'm copying off you.
Oho I loved this. It was random. It was weird and bizarre with just the right pinch of surreal. I'd love for you to continue this with some more home cooked mysteries. I do think that, however, there is a slight element missing here...
I understand what you're trying to do, and that's to add a new focus onto Pinkie's psyche to make her more like the stereotypical 'detective' archetype. Now this is a personal preference, but I think that the humor could adapt a lot better if you tried for a more stylistic 'film noire'-type of prose. For example, have you ever read "Calvin and Hobbes"? If you have; there's the infamous 'Tracer Bullet'
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This fellow right here. What I'm trying to get across is that I think Pinkie's intense swing of subconscious would be more jarring, and ultimately more funny if you provide a contrast of imagery and atmosphere through a switch in the perspective (like how it is pictured above). Pinkie might be putting herself in a more 'dramatic sense'. The setting can be portrayed by her imagination, and Twilight's actions can be subtle hints that things are not as they seem. It would take more work, but I think that it could be doable.
Your choice, but I thought I'd suggest it. The piece is already well done on its own.
Lovely work.
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:/
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One step ahead
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Alright, thanks. I wrote it in thirty or so minutes on a whim and also based of some various sources so yeah.
671420 It's fine, didn't see anything wrong with it. It's just not my cup of tea right now.
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'sokay
I have waited so long for this crossover. It's a shame that the pure essence of Benedict Cumberbatch can't be distilled and ponified, but I'll definitely keep an eye on this one to find out how you do.
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Alright, thanks for the interest
671442 hey if you need a proof reader(doesn't look like you do though) let me know and I will try to help.
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:Yeah, I'm usually okay at self-editing
671576 well you do a damn good job of it!
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thanks :3
671613 my notifications aren't stacking-_-
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Mine are
671635 they did earlier. I don't know why they're not now-_-
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Fimfic be trollin'?
671646 think so-_-
I loved this, especially Twilight's interventions
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thanks
671818 You are quite welcome, I do hope you continue making these, it seems to me that they have potential.
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As I said in the synopsis, depends on how many people show interest. Time is required to make good mystery after all
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You mean, Sherlock was Pinkie's first apprentice. No wonder why he is so good at his job.
It's Golden Harvest! Sneaky sister. I wonder what the surprise is.
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lol
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ahaha
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This is a good idea.